This is my first attempt at horror and I've been getting some help and advice I'm just looking for a proofreader who would be ok to give it a once over see if I'm getting the right message across with internal guilt self hate fear of repeating the past and a sense of desperation to a situation they once fled from as a kid

https://www.fimfiction.net/story/463709/what-would-you-give

VIEWCODE I'm Sorry Dashie

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Put your story up on google docs if you can.
It will help people and you because it's easier to point out issues.
Also you can have easy to follow discussions with each issue.

This way is much harder.

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cant use google docs otherwise i would most of the time i just copy abd paste current version in a msg if that helps

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Writing your stories on a phone makes things harder for you.
A lot of editors here prefer google docs.

But if you can't get to a computer then you have to take your time.
I would also suggest that you learn how to revise your work.

I'm not trying to be mean, when I first started writing, I had a lot to learn.
People did complain a lot about my issues. I had to learn how to revise my work.

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well lol just sent you it its nearly done just the last few parts im still going to be tweaking but would like your opion if its ok or not as a horror

I'll check it out and give a full report.