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is there any stories of starlight glimmer adopting a human child say around season 6 to current and after the series say the child was homeless on earth after his loving moms is killed by her boyfriend after drinking to much. but even though he is very smart for his age, he has Asperger’s syndrome, and as such is pretty much fucked over and kicked to the curb by the provincial government, and pretty much had to learn how to steal, con, and fight people not to mention adults twice his size. after he crosses a crooked cop he pretty much gets beaten and tazzed and left for dead and blacks out and is soon found by starlight glimmer after attempting a spell with twilight and the mirror portal take him back to an anthro equestria after saving the young child who remains human for some reason is taken to the hospital and after some fear from the kid and trying to run glimmer saves him from spoiled rich who is the main villian in the story become closer and closer and after a nightmare princess luna celestia the main 6 trixie and starlight go through his memories, starlight seeing the unhappy life he went through seeing a little bit of herself before she met twilight
starlight and her marefriend trixie decide to adopt him and give him a loving home, and help him get rit of the sadness in his heart, while a shaky romance builds between him diamond tiara and scootaloo who forge a herd together who are living with him after diamonds mom and scootaloos parents are being abusive to them while the kid tries to protect them while the ponies who love the three of them do the same while blueblood works with the abusive parents with shady nobiles behind the scene trying to make things miserable for the child and his new friends and family.....of course i cant write this but if anyone wants to use this they can im thinking the cmc are at least between 11 and 14 while the human and diamond are both 13

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i can think of a few things that will make the story very stale very fast with that because its has some of the same problems that will kill it before it can shine like the gary sue human with the dark past, the bullies that try and make humans life difficult, finding love happy ever after nothing to really make it stand out like idk something like the human not wanting to be their in the first place or something

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This idea is certainly promising. Write it, dude!

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