This is my first story and it is based around a bat pony going on a very, very, long adventure in the underworld, a series of caves and tunnels below Equestria before returning to the surface where her adventure continues.

I have made it to one of the major arches in the story and am looking for people to read over it and tell me what they think. Bear in mind that as I keep writing I have tried to improve from one arch to the next so it is a very long read.

Rated M:

https://www.fimfiction.net/story/400207/underworld