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Congrats, I feel sorry that he lost Lyra and almost everyone with him.
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The reason the first Movement is called “Severance” is because Symphony is severing himself from his old life. His faith, family, friends and his home. I thought this would give him a blank slate when he enters the Wasteland, but also gives him a backstory and some baggage. So, yeah, he pretty much did. The only exception to this is Carbine, because that’s just how the story unfolded.
6875249 Well you can't lose everyone. People are left behind, but some will survive. For Carbine this was also a severance in my opinion.
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Not that I'm disagreeing, but I'm curious as to how this is also a severance for Carbine.
6885264 Well not so much severance I suppose now that I think about it. He survived, he lost those that had become close to him. But in the end he's still close to being the raider as he was in the beginning. I don't know, maybe following Symphony is his severance.
Fun fact: Kkat actually regrets not having written the fic after the crystal empire, because he/she could have featured crystal ghouls. I might have to read this fic immediately to know if the plot of my fic will work without being considered taken.
Nice artwork, did you do it yourself?
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I read that the other day and thought it was really interesting. For the sake of my story's existence, I'm glad Kkat didnt't get to write the Empire. But I really am curious to know how it would have turned out. Hope writing your own fic goes well!
No, I didn't do the artwork. I commissioned Sw1tchbl4de to do it for me.
My praise to your teachers, it is clear that they thought you well! While many FoE stories are well made is it not many that think so far ahead to put their stories up in arcs, them more focused on pouring out words than how to arrange them.
Its a little sad that I am so late to the party, would have loved reading this chapter not knowing that there were 20 more in wait for me, but I guess that is what I get for being in hiatus from FoE for such a long while. Here to this chapter of the Crystal Heart saga, may its crescendo be worth the wait!
Nitpick:
"I turned my head and saw Carbine standing in the doorway with Tenacity levitating beside him." You have a double line here, so delete