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Are you a native English speaker? There are some really awkward sentence constructions in there, like "why you decided to this now". There is also some serious tense inconsistency in there. You switch between present and past all the time, even inside the dialogue.
On the story... well, I think they're getting a bit ahead of things if they decided that the end of the world was already the foreseen outcome of the war; sure, the megaspell threat was real, but Equestria was winning, by the end.
The main part, with the song, is pretty nice, though a lot of it is honestly just you describing the song as you listened to it. I'm also not sure how the song would be relevant to wartime Scootaloo, who had made it big all on her own and had already become a wealthy industrial magnate at that point.
The end with the Fallout 4 cryo-stable honestly felt tacked on. I see no need whatsoever to add that; in fact, this story would probably be a lot better with either a completely open ending where no one knows what happened to those two, or with someone finding that record in the ruins and wondering if DJ P0n-3 would be interested in it, implying that while they may have died, their song lived on.