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Interesting fanfic so far, keep it up.
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I believe I can answer that. Not trying to sound harsh here but your main character seems needlessly edgy and you really need to learn proper grammar and capitalization. You seem to capitalize words at random and should definitely thin about consulting the writing guide on the site. You've got potential for sure but need practice.
Basing off of first impressions, I'm guessing why this story is getting disliked is for 1.Stable Dweller cliche and/or 2. It's a FoE story. There is a few people who just dislikes FoE stories, for there is so many of them.