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"Mad e sense to me" Gasp! What is this! Could it be... the first typo in this story so far! For shame I say! Shame on you, shame on your family, and shame on your cow I say!
Could this be... another one... "We head weapons, ammunition, and some of us had armor"
Tsk tsk tsk, you are surely slipping with this chapter with those myriads of mistakes that I just listed. Its honestly a bit rare for me to not write more than I am right now, but I am simply flabbergasted over how good the story is and don't know how to find the right words, and instead of wasting time finding them do I just want to explore the next chapter, and the next one, and the next after that.
You are hitting that sweet spot between humor, action and surprisingly tragedy, and are even doing it with a mute character to boot, so my hat of to you.
The only one thing that I can comment on is that I hope that we will return to Orchestra at some point, or maybe even some other chars yet unseen, I know that it is a lot to ask for since I am 200K words behind, but you do really have an original setting in FoE, and believe you me that is rarer than a Water talisman!