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Awesome story.
However...
“It wasn’t all my fault.” He shook his head in disgust. “The arranged marage wasn’t my families idea. Silver Star had been a good friend of my mother’s back in their training days, so when my mom had me, and silver had Iron Cross…”
I know this was a typo. You meant marriage.
4939899 Yay! A comment! Btw, thanks for pointing that out. It's fixed
4948329 You also have one part where you say, "refugee's" in the possessive when it should have been, "refugees" in the plural.
Other than that a great chapter; have a fav!