4726264 Agreed. I just wanted to make it sound like the narrator thought of them as some sort of authority. Like even in his private thoughts he wants to use the word Minister because that's what they are to him. Also the fact that he worked for the Ministry of Peace so he would already have it ingrained in himself to say Minister Pie over Pinkie. That being said, I found the use of the word Minister slightly more than necessary. I tried to use pronouns where I could. Sorry.
My only complaint is that the term Minister gets redundant fast.
4726264 Agreed. I just wanted to make it sound like the narrator thought of them as some sort of authority. Like even in his private thoughts he wants to use the word Minister because that's what they are to him. Also the fact that he worked for the Ministry of Peace so he would already have it ingrained in himself to say Minister Pie over Pinkie. That being said, I found the use of the word Minister slightly more than necessary. I tried to use pronouns where I could. Sorry.