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so slow to come out and so short compared to Fo:E chapter wise. other than that the quality is easily on par with Fo:E well done keep up the good work
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I'm glad that you've enjoyed it so far! I know my release schedule can be less than desirable, but I like to multitask between projects most of the time. Chapters however are short to both let me get them out as quickly as I do, and to not let the story move too fast. With larger chapters, I tend to lose the scope of everything, and the break between short chapters lets the events soak into even my own mind.
It means a ton to hear though that you think my work is on par with FoE. Thank you for taking the time to read it.
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I'm glad you are enjoying the story so far! Yeah, I realize that some of my grammer is way off, and slowly I'm working on going through and fixing everything. So far only the first chapter has been corrected to this extent. It means the world to me that you've read part of my story. I do hope that you continue reading and giving me your thoughts on it!
I have to say, many FoE's have subsequently lost my interest--mainly the ones people tend to like the most (which i get a lit of heat for). This is one of a handful that I keep up on, and as a result enjoy to read.
Writers tend to lose their characters, and or just have a lack of all characterization more times than I can count. And when I don't like the characters, it takes a lot out of the story. I am liking your characters more and more each chapter. I shall add it to my favorites right now.
(Who knows why I've even waited this long?)
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Well, it makes me so damn happy to hear that you've stuck with it. I try my best to make this story and it's characters really something else that stands apart from everything else I've done. Thank you for sticking with it, and I hope that the chapters I bring you in the future will be just as entertaining as these have been!
4571927 And I can say, I'm well looking forward to reading them. I have yet to read your other work, butt I'll make a point to do so.
4571927 Oi--and now I can say my phone corrected 'but' to 'butt'
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Well, just know that my other work is quite a bit rougher than this! I got all of my tropes/references/standard heroic story elements out of the way in my other story. You've been warned.
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Don't worry, I don't mind!
Well, that was a bit unexpected. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Thanks for reading through and finding those, I have now fixed them. I really appreciate having stuff like that pointed out, just because it will help newcomers read smoothly! I hope you are enjoying the story even with it's errors.
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I do not have any proofreaders, just the one editor. And the things he misses are few compared to what he fixes. Chapters are a whole lot rougher than this when I hand it to him, he does a good job at fixing most of it. I can get ideas and chapters out quickly, just not with great grammar. I do apologize that it's so rough, but help is so hard to find normally. It's why I thank you for the things you've pointed out.
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Yeah, in FoE it was explained that because the Diamond Dogs mutated, they took on a different name.
Monty Python reference FTW!