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well shit i see no way to win this :/
4256028 That's the point =3 May I get your opinion on where I'm taking the story though? THis somewhat started out as a simple adventure story and idk the reactions I'm going to get for taking the story in this direction.
4257325 Well if anyone has read the sequel they know she wins in the end but at a high cost, the direction is good FoE is more adventure punctuated by brutal combat with the mane mare blacking out after receiving serious injury, try to keep that to a min, take a look at the battle of Friendship City if you need references for how to do a large battle, try to focus on the mane mares fight, with her helping others when there is a lull in hostels attacking her. If you are going for army of undead dont make them perfect they are not ponies anymore and will have to be slower on reaction times and bad aim, on the flip side look at the battle for Stable 99 in FoE: Project Horizons civilized ponies can work well together when defending there home where the undead ,or as in horizons raiders, will not. maybe this will help. just keep quality up and ponies to persona.
4257750 Thanks, we'll definitely keep that in mind =P I was just worried that people wouldn't like me going away from the normal "Enclave, raiders, or some other cookie-cutter Fallout villain" route.
4257862 That's the thing about this world, its magic! Nearly anything can and will happen as long is it is well written you can get away with almost anything, tho personally i just cant seem to read FoE stories that have the mane mare, a mane stallion just kills it for me. But male companions no prob, go figure, now just cause it is possible does not mean you should stretch it too far! just in essence use common sense and don't compromise your story because one or two dun like it so far so good! so yea keep it up
Well a lot of ponies are doing to die