120 years after the war, a young trader and his friends are given an incredible task from and unsuspecting source that will change the face of the Equestrian wasteland forever. Question is, will it be for better? or for worse?
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Congratulations on making the completed FoE multipart Side Stories club! :D
Also, kinda neat epilogue. I could totally imagine the somber music playing in the background to the slideshow and narration of the last bit.
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Thanks, it really means alot!
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I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you so much for your dedication in reading this, it means a ton to me. Thank you for being so awesome!
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Yeah, I wanted to have some lighthearted moments in there, not to mention use all those perks that Backlash has gained that say he'd get help from random ponies. Just cashing in all of his chips as it were!
That story was absolutely epic! I haven't really read many other FoE stories, just Project Horizons and yours, but very well thought out and planned. You are an awesome author, and you've inspired me to try and write my own FoE fan fiction. :D
I blew through this story in four days, only stopping to do school work, work, or sleep. You tugged at my emotions with every twist and turn, from the horrors of Whinny and Harmony, to the death of Brass (where I cried, just so ya know ;-;). Overall, an epic story! ;D
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I worked hard on it, trying to make it the best story I could, and am glad to hear that I didn't let you down. But four days? Damn that's dedication!
But the thing is, I would love to see what you can come up with. FoE just has that openness to it, allowing for anything to be possible in a story, and I can't wait to see what you can do with it. You've earned a follow, and have your first reader waiting for release! And if you have any issues or things you'd want to talk about with it, don't hesitate to ask! My work is nowhere near as good as some of the other FoE artists out there, but I'm willing to do what I can if you ever need some help.
One last thing, if you want to read more that I have done, I would suggest FoE: The Long Winter (Which I co-write), or FoE: Better Days! And if none of those seem appealing, you can take a look at the authors notes to any of the later chapters to Merchants of Hope to find some suggestions of stories that helped inspire me.
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Thank you for your feedback! I do need to go over the first four chapters again, and I plan to do it sometime, just not sure when. Seriously, you have no idea how much I appreciate a downvote that come with an explanation. I'll be sure to tell you when I've updated the first chapters.
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Yes, the first few chapters were very rushed, and I do plan on going over them again here soon to stretch it out a bit. I really found the grove to my writing in chapter 5, which I know is a bit late, but for my first fic I am told it's not bad. Also, thank you for pointing out those errors, I have fixed them all. As for having a 'Beta Reader', I do have one, but people miss things and make mistakes. Half the good fics have more than one, but I haven't been so lucky as to get more.
I really do appreciate your input, and hope that the horridness of my writing doesn't discourage you from reading further. Though I do understand if the mistakes bother you too much to do so.
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I'm so glad to see that you finished it! I've missed ya around here buddy! Thank you for reading, and all the feedback over the chapters, I really appreciated it. You are a fucking legend! Never quit being awesome.
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Yeah, looking back on things I really did rush the first few chapters. I hate how they turned out and I do plan on going back and rewriting them to make them better eventually. It was my first story and I have learned a lot since those initial chapters, and it's around chapter 5 that things start to go a bit slower. I hope it doesn't deter you too much, but I can understand how a bad start can just make the rest of a story not worth it.
I got taken away by other things in the middle of reading this, but well done, Gamma Deekay! I really loved it, even if the ending was a little cliché with the one way trip thing.
The line in the epilogue, about all the pain being worth it in the end, hit me right in the feels. That part was well done.