We've Heard many tales from around when Littlepip roamed the wastes, but how many others saw the horror of those first few days? Inspired by KKat's Fallout Equestria
Okay, It's good I'll give you that, the names seem a bit silly to me at first and I got a good laugh when he said "I'd fuck me." But besides that, it is good and you should keep up the good work, there are a few grammar mistakes and double spaces in the fic, also some letters missing from words, sorry I'm to tired to point them out, Maybe later but besides that keep up the great work can't wait for the next chapter.
3176600 I'm looking into it already, you may find several of the spelling mistakes will be fixed. Grammatical errors i'm looking for some help from a couple others on that front. I've got a few sources I can check first on that. Still, these errors are what I get for having a word program that likes to hide it's spell check function.
Okay, It's good I'll give you that, the names seem a bit silly to me at first and I got a good laugh when he said "I'd fuck me." But besides that, it is good and you should keep up the good work, there are a few grammar mistakes and double spaces in the fic, also some letters missing from words, sorry I'm to tired to point them out, Maybe later but besides that keep up the great work can't wait for the next chapter.
Rock will never take off. It'll fall like a Led Zepplin
3176600 I'm looking into it already, you may find several of the spelling mistakes will be fixed. Grammatical errors i'm looking for some help from a couple others on that front. I've got a few sources I can check first on that. Still, these errors are what I get for having a word program that likes to hide it's spell check function.
3176639 Perhaps, but you never know.
so far so good but I hope Data is safe