Commander Cloud Striker and her wingmare Storm Wing find themselves 200 years from the day the magaspells fell on equestria waking up to the wasteland that equestria has become How will they deal with whats to come.
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Use PERIODS. Please use proper sentences for the love of God. Love the story idea and I'd hate to see it got to waste.
Just started reading it. The story is great... After you get by the non use of proper sentences. It just makes it hard to read you know? You dont know where to stop and think or go onto the next topic, Some serious editing needs to be done here to be readable, hell i bet those dislikes are just because of not using proper punctuation