This is why i love it when artists write! They come up with wonderfull concepts and give it there all just like in a picture.
Beutifull work btw and i have to ask is horrizons cannon in this or just the main story? AND ANOTHER THING! Pleeeese have him meet the steel rangers that would be so freking cool!
7906825 Thank you for the compliments! As for your question, I don't plan to integrate anything involving any other sidefic. I find that it's better not to require the reader to have knowledge of something you don't directly provide them with, especially in regards to a fic as long and extensive as Project Horizons.
7907175 Thanks for the clarification i just like to make shure some times!
Adding cannon from side ficks can be interesting but i feel that a blank slate makes for a more creative story at times Either way i would love too see more and rember a story is about enjoying what youre doing so take it easy ok?
Its rare finding stories so close up and down with the war, so colour me intrigued! Onwards on the grumpy old man adventures to find a pair of graves and/or ghouls of his kids!
Nitpicks: "Just meant I had four times as much supplies to myself when it happened" I would say "many" or "the amount". Sounds a bit clunky right now. " saw the strange pink cloud swallowing whole the city and mountainside it was built upon." Move whole to the end of the sentence. "I had never seen something so disgusting" Linebreak error
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This is why i love it when artists write! They come up with wonderfull concepts and give it there all just like in a picture.
Beutifull work btw and i have to ask is horrizons cannon in this or just the main story?
AND ANOTHER THING! Pleeeese have him meet the steel rangers that would be so freking cool!
7906825 Thank you for the compliments!
As for your question, I don't plan to integrate anything involving any other sidefic. I find that it's better not to require the reader to have knowledge of something you don't directly provide them with, especially in regards to a fic as long and extensive as Project Horizons.
7907175 Thanks for the clarification i just like to make shure some times!
Adding cannon from side ficks can be interesting but i feel that a blank slate makes for a more creative story at times
Either way i would love too see more and rember a story is about enjoying what youre doing so take it easy ok?
7907315 Thank you!
Well I reviewed this fic so... yeah, here you go, you really should update this:
Review
Its rare finding stories so close up and down with the war, so colour me intrigued! Onwards on the grumpy old man adventures to find a pair of graves and/or ghouls of his kids!
Nitpicks:
"Just meant I had four times as much supplies to myself when it happened" I would say "many" or "the amount". Sounds a bit clunky right now.
" saw the strange pink cloud swallowing whole the city and mountainside it was built upon." Move whole to the end of the sentence.
"I had never seen something so disgusting" Linebreak error