The characters are well written, believable and interesting. Really liking how well the narration flows and how much personality it has. You're also good at making descriptions. I can imagine scenes clearly, something that's not attainable in most fics
There's a few spelling and formatting errors here and there, I recommend you look for an editor to iron them out for you. Other than that, no complaints. I will be watching this fic closely.
I really like this so far
The characters are well written, believable and interesting. Really liking how well the narration flows and how much personality it has.
You're also good at making descriptions. I can imagine scenes clearly, something that's not attainable in most fics
There's a few spelling and formatting errors here and there, I recommend you look for an editor to iron them out for you.
Other than that, no complaints. I will be watching this fic closely.
Wait weren't they supposed to be goin a job and payin medical bill..... I sense some dastardly deeds incoming
Told ya I would read it! And I'm not disappointed so far. Keep it up!