I don't know what to tell you, so here's one of Maud Pie's poems. (It's about rocks. They're all about rocks.) "Rock. You are a rock. Grey. You are grey. Like a rock. Which you are. Rock." Solid work.
Adventure7 stories -
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Sometimes adventure can be more than a Daring Do kind of tale, so I put personal struggles and achievement stories here, too.