Ch-ch-changes · 9:55pm Jul 26th, 2012
Hello!
Hmmm... This feels rather like a message in a bottle, as I've no idea if it will ever be read.
Anyway, ramblings aside: the next portion of Ponystar Celestia is proceeding apace, and will hopefully be up soon.
How soon? Well, that's why I'm making this blog entry.
You see, in my vanity I submitted PSC to Equestria Daily. As I rather expected, it was rejected. However, the reviewer left some interesting comments behind, at least some of which I'll work in to the first chapter the next time I can make an editing run.
One suggestion was that I break the first chapter into smaller chunks and re-post it as three or four chapters.
So--having tagged this entry to pop up for those of you kind enough to have faved my work--I ask you, dear reader: do you like that idea? Would you like the first mega-chapter republished as a handful of smaller ones, or are you in love with the current format?
I suppose it's cheating to mention that if you go for the shorter format, I'll publish Chapter 2 in smaller chunks as well, and thus it will get to you faster...
Please let me know what you think!
Yes, please, that chapter was way too long.
I agree. The first chapter was a wall of text. A very interesting wall, but a wall all the same.