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Previews · 12:24am Jul 20th, 2012

For this blog post, I'm going to go and place two previews for some chapters/stories that I'm writing so you guys can get hyped about them (I hope).

Preview for my next story, Music Box of Doom:

Spike looked at the entrance of the Everfree Forest with fright, gulping. "Come on Spike!" he told himself, trying to gather as much courage as possible, "You can do this! For Rarity!"

Spike looked up to the sky, recalling the events that made come to the forest in the first place. It had been like any normal day, with him doing the most mundane chores such as organizing the endless shelves of books and dusting. When he had finished the chores, Twilight thanked him and left him to do whatever he wanted, so he decided to talk to Rarity, seeing if he could do anything for her.

"Well darling, there is one thing," Rarity had said.

"What is it?" Spike asked with heart shaped eyes.

"You see, there's this client and she wants some sort of flower on her dress called 'White Moonlight' or something or another, but the problem is it's in the Everfree Forest."

Without even thinking, Spike puffed up his chest and said, "I can go," Spike met eyes with the unicorn of his dreams, and in the manliest tone he could muster he concluded, "If you would like me to."

Rarity's eyes beamed with joy, "Oh Spikey-Wikey! Thank you!" she trotted over to Spike and pecked Spike on the cheek, causing him to lose all connection to reality.

"Spike? Are you okay?" she asked. A little worry displayed on her features as she saw the dragonling's dreamy face and the wobbling of his body, as if he was made out of jelly

Spike shook himself and replied in a slurred voice, "Yeah, I'm fine."

Rarity cocked an eyebrow, "Okay," she proceeded to hand Spike two things; a sack and a picture. The picture was of a plant with white petals and black spots on it with a green stem, "Now Spike, these things are what you will need. The sack is to store the White Moonlight and the picture is what it looks like."

Spike nodded, "Don't worry Rarity, I'll bring back the flower."

"If you do," Rarity said, "I'll give you one of my rare rubies."

Spike's mouth watered when she said that, but once again he was able to shake off the feeling and with both prizes in mind (the rare but tasteful ruby, and the affectionate display of Rarity towards him) he spoke with courage in his voice and said, "Okay then! I'll be back as soon as possible."

As he started to walk out of the boutique he could hear Rarity's voice yelling, “Be careful Spike!”

Spike looked back down at the forest. "Well, I guess I should head in now," he said to himself as he walked into the abundant greenery ahead of him, on the lookout for the plant known as the White Moonlight.






Here's a preview for the newest Power Hour chapter, Fistful of Dougnut Holes!

Once dawn approached, the nine comrades found that the train has stopped in their destination and made their way out of the train and onto the platform with bewilderment in their eyes. Towering buildings of white surrounded them while the streets were a dark green, something that the reviewers found odd. To make things even stranger for the three, a tall castle with different towers spiraling around it could be seen in the distance.

"The Nostalgia Critic, Linkara, and Angry Joe," Twilight said gliding her hoof over to the city that sprawled out in front of them, "Welcome to Canterlot."

The three broke out into laughter, getting a harsh glare from Twilight, "What's so funny?"

"The name!" laughed Joe, "The name is so stupid!"

"Yeah," wheezed The Nostalgia Critic, "What's next? Manehatten? Las Pegasus? The stupid names are endless!"

"You have to admit that the name's pretty dumb," agreed Linkara through strained breathing, "Especially since you guys are ponies and it's a pun of Camelot."

"Camelot?" asked the six ponies in unison.

"In our reality, Camelot is a fictional kingdom," explained Linkara, "It's also a great movie!"

The Nostalgia Critic and Joe let out collective groans, "Oh god, not again," said Joe.

"What's it about?" asked Pinkie as she approached Linkara.

"Well," started Linkara, "It's about-"

"SAY!" interrupted The Nostalgia Critic, in a vein attempt to stop Linkara talking about that godforsaken movie, "Why don't we go get some breakfast?"

"I am quite famished," agreed Rarity, "Maybe we can go to that restaurant with the-"

"PONY JOE'S!" yelled Pinkie.

"What's that?" asked Joe.

"It's a shop where they sell some of the most delicious doughnuts ever!" answered Rainbow Dash, licking her lips, as she thought about the treats.

"Okay, we'll go," giggled Twilight, she turned her attention to the reviewers and asked, "Are you guys okay with that?"

"Of course!" replied The Nostalgia Critic as he turned his head around.

"Doughnuts make everything better," stated Joe.

"They do," agreed Linkara.

"Then it's settled," chirped Pinkie, followed by a pout by Rarity, "Sorry Rarity. It's eight to nine, so that means we get to go to Pony Joe's!"

"But I didn't get to vote," pointed out Fluttershy.

"Neither did I," said Applejack.

"Still, you girls want doughnuts right?" asked Pinkie, getting nods from the mares, "Then let's go!" she shouted, bouncing ahead of the group in the direction of the shop, the others following.




Now I'm on the fence on whether I should do a crossover for this or this after I finish writing Music Box. Which one do you think I should do? Both? Neither?

Anyway, I hope you enjoy these previews! I also got recruited for a Brony choose your own adventure, though I haven't written anything for it yet.

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Comments ( 18 )

I had no idea you were planning on continuing the Power Hour fic, if you want I'll read and correct the flaws that I can find. If you currently have a more complete version of the chapter PM me, if not just reply me and I'll read what you have here.
I'm kind at an impas on my story, but as soon as I'm able I'll continue to write and send you the chapter for proof reading.


Take care man.
May the ponies be with you, always. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_dealwithit.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Rainbow_dealwithit.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Vinyl_Scratch.png

O.k. I see what you are doing here. It's going well.

do a crossover on this.

239314 Uh, there's no link on that. My two thises had links leading to the Crysis theme and the James Bond theme.

240367
That's the point.
You don't get it?
Arcade: "Should I do this or this?"
Me: "This."

James Bond. Do James Bond. We all want a James Bond story.:pinkiehappy:

240947 Okay. So should I do Rainboweye, Unicorn with the Golden Horn, Magicball, From Equestria with Love, or just do a James Bond in Equestria story?

241296 Just a James Bond in Equestria story. I haven't watched any of the movies as a whole, I just watch up to where Bond gets his gadgets.

241115
No sheepish face? :twilightoops::twilightblush::twilightsheepish:

241649 Oh. Damn. How about this? :twilightsheepish:

241899
Good enough. :pinkiehappy:
So many pony faces. :pinkiesad2: Incredible.

I wanna say Crysis, since I'm the one who recommended it to you, but a James Bond fic is an absolutely revolutionary idea! :pinkiehappy: Fast cars, sex, guns, action, snappy one-liners; I LOVE IT!!! :rainbowkiss:

Also, do the Piers Brosnan version of James Bond if you go for Bond.

245894 I'm thinking about using either Pierce Bronson or Timmothy Dalton.

246065
Yeah, I've never finished "The Living Daylights" because I found it boring, so I vote Brosnan. :ajsmug:

246172 I enjoyed The Living Daylights. One of my fav's, but Goldeneye and Tommorow were great too. So I guess I'll use Pierce since he might be easier to write. Anyway, what's your take on Roger Moore?

246221
Eh, not as bad as he's made out to be by a lot of people, but still not the best.
1.Sean Connery
2.Piers Brosnan :ajsmug:
3.Daniel Craig
4.Roger Moore, Timothy Dalton, George Lazenby

246422 I don't see why people hate Craig. (Not you of course) I've read some of the books and he acts just like Bond in the books, a cold blooded killer.

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