New Story that I'm very excited for! (Subject to updates)

Finally, after months of mixed developing and procrastination my new story is nearing completion!
This is the first story that I'm letting loose on, so expect some funny and completely stupid moments
This story features a near complete OC cast that'll be a collab with the real Bionic Force where we both write separate chapters and edit the others. The first is mine of course.

Just so I don't have to waste time in the story describing my OCs here's is a description of the three main ones. (Subject to updates as the story goes on)

Spirit Shift: 18 years old, Pegasus Blue/red mane and sky blue coat with soft red eyes. He’s silly, childish, whimsical, fun loving, dauntless, and clever, though not a genius like his brother. His hyperactive and naive personally often leads the group into dangerous situations. Usually, he needs to be held back by Bionic because he won't stay still otherwise. Spirit eagerly sets out to see the world and explore dangerous territories simply for the fun of it. CutiesMark: Three question Marks sharing the same point.
Spirit Shift: Spirit‘s body also contains another personality that he occasionally shifts over to, hence his name. This personality is named Shift. Except for the fact that he’s much more forceful, violent and mature (whereas Spirit is playful, hyper, and childish.), he acts like Spirit most of the time. Bionic knows this and makes him wear a magic sealing garment in the form of goggles to regulate the switch. If the goggles come off then Shift automatically takes over. If the goggles are off for a significant amount of time the switch between the two becomes unpredictable.
When in control, Spirit’s coat turns a deep shade of blue and his eyes gain a darker reddish brown color to it. While not evil or antagonistic, Shift is snarky, condescending, and quick to insult others for fun. Shift does not particularly care for most things. But when he does, he’ll go to dangerous, almost lethal lengths to either obtain it, protect, or destroy it. Depending on how he feels about it. Unlike Spirit, Shift is incredibly smart, resourceful, and focused. He is easily able to use his powers in ways that Spirit could not.

Bionic Force: 13 years old, Earth Pony, Light grey coat with green eyes and green mane with thin silver lines running through. Spirit’s slightly more mature little brother. Dangerously curious, expressionless, and impossible to see through. Level-headed on the surface while unfathomably unstable on the inside. Always wanting to know more information, Bionic chose to go with Spirit on his death quest mainly to see all sorts of crazy and new things to aid him in his research. The only things that he has a passion for is martial arts, dark magics, and experimental technology. Force knows about Shift, and while he holds no dislike towards him, he prefers Shift to be held back because of certain reasons. Cutie mark: Radiation Hazard Symbol ☢

Blazing Notes: 19 years old, Pegasus: Grey coat with a black mane and blue eyes. Nothing Special, just a hopeless flirt who’ll hit on any mare he sees whether their interested or not. He chose to tag along with Bionic and Spirit under the expectation that they would simply be exploring and sightseeing, but after receiving his repaired guitar from Bionic, and being told that if he leaves it will be taken, he chose to press on with them. His one solace is the fact that he gets to meet hundreds of beautiful mares along the way. The guitar on his back has been modified by Bionic to be sort of special. Cutie Mark: Flaming Guitar. Notes is aware of Shift and admits that, at times, he enjoys Shift's company more than Spirit.

Soul Hearts: 17 years old, Earth Pony with a light pink coat and dark red mane with golden eyes. Another one of Spirit and Bionic’s colthood friends alongside Notes. The unofficial fourth member that plays catch up to them throughout the story. She’s very straightforwards and narrow sighted, usually focusing on one thing at a time. Usually, it’s catching up with Spirit’s group. Originally, Spirit did invite her, but Bionic tricked her and told her the wrong time that they were to leave as well as the wrong destination. She’s a very kind hearted tomcolt that’s not afraid to get rough. She also harbors an intense, burning hatred for diamond dogs due to her past. She is fiercely in love with Spirit, boarding on stalkerish, though she’s also very straightforward with it, willing to yell it to the sky if asked. However, she never get’s the chance to say it to Spirit himself, due to constant intervention from Bionic. She’s fully aware of Shift and even though he unnerves her, she accepts that he’s still apart of Spirit and thus deserves to be loved equally. Her cutie mark is a heart with a hoof shaped bruise mark in the middle.