The Sinner of Equestria

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Chrome Masquerade

Chrome Masquerade #1 · Nov 24th, 2023 · · · Operation One: Wings of Freedom ·

After four years of serving her one million year sentence in the Panopticon of New York. Adelle Topaz was on her way to living her life as a second-rate citizen.

Do you mean like a second class citizen?

DivineCross

DivineCross #2 · Nov 24th, 2023 · · · Operation One: Wings of Freedom ·

I haven’t finished reading yet but I’ve noticed that it keeps switching between first and third person

ElementBrigade

ElementBrigade #3 · Nov 24th, 2023 · · · Operation One: Wings of Freedom ·

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The original one had it switch from first person to third person. As a means to not confuse people and because I got tired of first person perceptive, I decided to go with third person to make it easier.

ElementBrigade

ElementBrigade #4 · Nov 24th, 2023 · · · Operation One: Wings of Freedom ·

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Didn't notice that one, thanks for pointing that out.

Chrome Masquerade

Chrome Masquerade #5 · Nov 24th, 2023 · · · Operation One: Wings of Freedom ·

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No problem.

gman1311

gman1311 #6 · Nov 25th, 2023 · · · Operation One: Wings of Freedom ·

Shame the devs shut down the servers for freedom wars, I enjoy the game as a teen.

Warhorse

Warhorse #7 · Nov 25th, 2023 · · · Operation One: Wings of Freedom ·

Thanks for making this easier for us to read ElementBrigade. Also, can you now focus on this fic? Cause I like how your character's philosophy appeals to me. And I agree that Celestia should be put in her place.

ElementBrigade