Failing to survive during the retribution from the people from On High, Adelle Topaz wakes up to find herself in the body of a bat pony. Will she be able to survive in this strange and colorful world called Equestria?
After four years of serving her one million year sentence in the Panopticon of New York. Adelle Topaz was on her way to living her life as a second-rate citizen.
11757451 The original one had it switch from first person to third person. As a means to not confuse people and because I got tired of first person perceptive, I decided to go with third person to make it easier.
Thanks for making this easier for us to read ElementBrigade. Also, can you now focus on this fic? Cause I like how your character's philosophy appeals to me. And I agree that Celestia should be put in her place.
Do you mean like a second class citizen?
I haven’t finished reading yet but I’ve noticed that it keeps switching between first and third person
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The original one had it switch from first person to third person. As a means to not confuse people and because I got tired of first person perceptive, I decided to go with third person to make it easier.
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Didn't notice that one, thanks for pointing that out.
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No problem.
Shame the devs shut down the servers for freedom wars, I enjoy the game as a teen.
Thanks for making this easier for us to read ElementBrigade. Also, can you now focus on this fic? Cause I like how your character's philosophy appeals to me. And I agree that Celestia should be put in her place.
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Yeah, real shame. This game really needs a remake of some kind.