Doing good can't wait to see the next chapter

This is getting good

Hm, manus' s power is still inside his arm. Very interesting.

This story definitely needs some editing to clear up all the errors, but it's still an enjoyable read so far, if a bit disjointed here and there.

So he's alive again is he? I always wondered what he would've looked like when he was corrupted by the abyss.

hey can you bring sif into this story please

Okay I'm sorry to say but I have to stop reading here. I enjoyed the story so far but it falls into so many HIE story tropes and makes artorias into a cut and paste human in equestria instead of his own character hell he speaks in american English instead of olde English or with an accent like everyone in lodran does...

There are no "squads" in times like Artorias's. There are Legions, Company's, Bands and so on. But squad is a more modern term... And sounds ridiculous coming from a medieval knight

Also to a foreign ruler, a knight does not kneel. That's a sign of loyalty and submission. He should bow. Unless you're saying that Artorias is pledging himself to someone he hasn't known for 10 minutes then I can only assume you're mistaken.

Also (yes this is getting old for me too) the correct way to refer to a Princess or Prince is your Highness. Your Majesty is for the Queen and King.

6378659 Maybe someone, one day, will make a crossover with Patches in it. Then they're stuck with his accent. Also it'd be funny to watch Patches kick ponies down holes XD.

Just call me Artorias or Knight Artorias or whichever do you feel like." he said with a confident tone.

When he turned around , Artorias

Artorias said matter-of-factly

her mood changed into a grim expression.

hoof,smiling "Princess Celestia's

This caused everypony to huddle at Artorias, trying to help him.

He immediately took his left-hand gauntlet off, and saw

" he said proudly "

*Double space*

When he turned around , Artorias

At this , his grip on his talisman grew tighter...ready to fire. "

" Captain Shatterstorm,

" Sir Artorias,

" Oh really?

" I have tried to negotiate

there is no need for formalities ." She chuckled " I believe,

" I am just doing my duty your majes-"

Only officials call me Princess. "

Artorias nodded politely

" Um, excuse me...

" Twilight Sparkle"

" Oooh I see.

" Quickly, get a medic!" Shining Armor barked to a royal guard while he ran towards Artorias .

" Forgive me for my rudeness,

" My name is Rarity."

"Howdy' , mah name's Applejack. Nice to meet ya partner." She said while extending her right foreleg , which Artorias took and shook.

" Thank ya' kindly Artorias,

" My name's Rainbow Dash

" It is nice to meet you Miss Dash,

*Unneeded space*

hoof,smiling "Princess Celestia's

*missing space*

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Ah, a fellow member of the grammar police!

⭐ you get a good star. Why, idk