A Dark Souls - MLP: FIM crossover, where Knight Artorias The Abysswalker got transported to Equestria as a second chance to live his life again. He must act as Equestria's guardian from a force he is all too familiar with.
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Finally! ARTORIAS, THE MOTHERBUCKING ABUSSWALKER HAS COME TO A RICTION I CAN STAND!
I was excited when typing, please excuse any grammatical errors.
I feel its missing a few periods, but besides that, keep crafting this beaute :D
I know nothing abaut dark sholes but this seems interesting.
Oh thank goodness, please more!
DAT cut dialogue though...
This needs to be looked over and cleaned up. You have a tense consistancy problem. Most of this is in past tense but you'll suddenly finish a sentence with a clause in present tense which doesn't match the rest of the sentence, little alone the rest of the piece.
I imagine ponies would be terrified of him. He's like ten feet tall and clad in face-concealing body armour.
Fix some grammar man but other than that an interesting story
Always wanted to play this game after Mr Rhexx pkayed it but got dissuaded due to its difficulty.
One: I really wish he was speaking like most of the others do. With all the "thee's" and "thine's". "Mine eternal gratitude is owed to you, brace knight. Pray thee, cast the Abyss away and do what I could not." Kinda like that but better because I'm not a writer XD.
Two: really wish Artorias was sent to equestria as crap as he was when he was defeated XD just see this lumbering mess with a floppy arm who still kicks all the ass.
I wish that Sif could come along with him, but he is already dead so, no much for asking about that now right?
''The Legend of Artorias is a lie '' VaatiVidya