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Occasional FimFic contributor. Also short reviews on request. Blog for silliness, music, writing. STATUS 2024.05.18: DIE TO THE SPRING PROMENADE

May
18th
2024

STORY UPDATE: NEW CHAP OUT NOW DELIVERING SWEETNESS & BEYOND. Chap 3 · 7:34am 1 hour ago

EDelivering on Sweetness & Beyond
When Derpy and Crafty Crate deliver a package to a parallel dimension of sweet and innocent ponies, things go awry, and Ocean Mist, protégé of Kimono, learns a lesson as she overcomes her limitations to help them out
abrony-mouse · 12k words · 150 views

The slice of life comedy, set in G3/G4, continues! Introducing a large stable of new ponies, including Wysteria and Starcatcher.

“Of course! Sky Wishes and Starcatcher! They have magic!”

Starcatcher and Sky Wishes were known to grant wishes.

Wysteria waves the little filly off. As she turns back to her pumpkin patch, though, the confused look returns.

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REVIEW SERIES

Have a look at my deep dive review series which drills into artist's work that I already have a few reviews of, and which talks in more detail about all aspects of the writing process, as well as interviews the author.

#1 Loganberry 'the Wordsmith'

Check out my light-hearted, short review/recommendation series! Positives only (negatives shared by PM). If you want a review, just ask! My reviewer details, including tag preferences and my approach to reviewing, are below.

#1 Winston; #2 Ulcuran; #3 Loganberry; #4 Loganberry; #5 Loganberry; #6 AltruistArtist; #7 Petrichord [NSFW]; #8 Semillon; #9 Recon777; #10 Quoterific #11 Sockpuppet #12 Gavier

Reviews that aren't recommendations, but were close and with editing could be recommended in future.

#1 Gavier #2 ales_ponies; #3 Alzrius; #4 Crownofdissonance

Also see my review group: 2024 reviews here.

Testimonials (for the deep-dive)

Review requests

Have a story for me? Great!

I will skim-read short fics initially and give a smol review on that. I might then return for a much more in-depth read and review later. I will read/review long fics if I trust the author, normally after reading shorter fics by them, or by reading a chapter of a longer story which can stand on its own four hooves.

Why skim read?

Skim reading is fast-reading. I won't pause to work out what's going on (much) and I won't re-read complex sentences. This lets me a) read/review extremely fast and b) give you a review based on the basic 'feel' for the story that is coming across, which most readers will have - rather than get my idiosyncratic take. It also lets you take my review in a fairly light-hearted spirit, hopefully.

Genres:

Adventure
Alternate Universe *
Anthology
Anthro
Comedy
Crossover *
Dark
Drama
Horror
Human
Mystery
Porn
Random
Romance
Sad
Science Fiction
Second Person
Slice of life
Thriller
Tragedy

*Depends on the AU/cross-over series. I have a list here.

Themes/Chars/Series I love/hate:

Other pony gens (all of them, even G2 and Ponylife)
Pinkie
Families
Introversion/angst
Irony
Angels / Devils
Good / Evil

None of these are absolute, though, so if you are thinking of recommending a fic or asking for a review in one of the categories, please still do, but with an explanation of how the genre could still work for me.

General FAQ
Can I recommend others' work for review? Yes.

Apr
24th
2024

The basis of all my current writing: the story palette · 2:36pm April 24th

I arrange my writing into both an overall palette as well as a palette for each scene. I call it a palette because I draw on each part of it when writing up my plan for each scene, a bit like a paint palette (and I use it to inform my plans for the writing)

Palette
Character
Place (lore)
Genre
Relationship
*Pink theme
Senses
Emotional interest
Emotional conflict –
Practical conflict-
Images
**Meta

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3404445
no problem :) look forward to seeing your content! :twilightsmile:

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no problem :) look forward to seeing your content!

Thanks for the watch

3402412
no problem :) look forward to seeing your content!

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