Wishing Lantern by Quoterific (Random Recommendations in <50 words #10) · 1:19pm May 15th
[CUTE]
Overall. This is how a unicorn writes.
Best lines:
She painted her colours with vivid and bright hues and shades, unlike the dull and subdued shades of Bridlewood. Instead of gloomy faces, joyful smiles were painted onto ponies.
Sniffling and blinking away tears, she looked down at her final piece of the night’s sky. Looking up into the clearing, she looked up at the stars as they twinkled and blinked down at her. She never felt so distant as the stars themselves. She was just like the stars in a way, a twinkling bit of hope in an area of darkness.
She was well aware of what the pegasi and earth ponies are like, according to what other unicorns say about them.[...]
Were they really like that?
She glanced down at the letter.[..,]
She turned her head towards the letter, a yawn escaping her mouth.
“Hope we see each other soon… new friend.”
Why read? immaculate movie-led G5 characterization; feels; cute; ultra slice of life
Flaws. Could be bolder with G5's limited lore.
Meta: Skim-read? ✔ Full-read? TBC Recommend Author? TBC
Final thought. Now show us how a unicorn reads
You gotta dip right in.
