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This needs an editor, badly. Other than that, its a good story.
7494260 can i be a editor?
you really need a editor or at least double check your work. Because there are so many small errors that should be easy to see
Update?
7511874 soon i pinkie promise just have school to deal with
I just noticed, this has a sex tag! I wonder how this will turn out if the last chapter is anything to go by.
Well it is pretty unedited but it is still readable, which is nice. Pretty sweet story bruh :).
Now I know why this author sucks so bad he has made two of the most terrible stories I have ever read period. You good sir or madam need to learn grammar pacing and various other BASICS of writing otherwise you just seem like a twit.
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your comments are filled with nothing but hate
Get an editor,,,,,,
rarity is generosity
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Its true brutal and harsh but true
Okay, I'm out, I've read up to the part that he changed back into a human (mostly) and I gotta say, there WAS alot of potential, but this story is bad, it's also so bloody fast paced rushed, and the grammar is bad
The story is good so far but lacks punctuation.
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I do have another story called Starting a new life, I think its a little better than this one if you want to give it a shot
I tried..... I really tried to read this, because the premise was cool, but holy fuck this is some of the most atrocious grammar I have ever read. It is physically painful for me to read. This is the second story I've read of yours and the problems from the first exist here as well. Gonna try your most recent story and pray it's better.
This story sounds like another series I love it's called: {A Wolf Among Ponies}