Overdosing On Twilights

by Michael Hudson

First published

A loyal Rainbow Dash gets treated by three very hung, very horny Twilights, and it's not even her birthday!

Twilight didn't tell Rainbow she was going to be bringing alternate hers to the castle. Twilight didn't tell them just how cute her submissive maid was. No one told anypony how awesome a gangbang with yourself could be. Then again, that last one is pretty self explanatory, and they have a prime subject to prove why with Rainbow Dash.

Contains: Three Futas on a pony Spitroasting Triple penetration Verbal and Physical (consented) abuse Sub/Dom asphyxiation Cum Inflation Cock bulging Handjob while inside someone vaginal Anal Blowjob Anal stretching Actual Spoilers For the Rest No Seriously I warned you. A Forth Twilight Quadruple penetration Two cocks in the ass All the way through

Commissioned by anonymous.

Art by Elzzombie who I can't link due to Fimfic rules.

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Looking through the door, Rainbow knew they weren’t her mistress. They looked like her mistress, but it was a feeling of familiarity at this point. How they could look at her without surprise, shame, or shock like most ponies. She looked at her as what she was: A toy. A thing usually given to foals with the holes to make her useful for full grown ponies. These two didn’t see her like that. They were surprised.

Rainbow slowly trotted in, her tail flicking from side to side over her enflamed nethers, her body reacting as it always did to the site of her mistress. She couldn’t blame it, and her small, french maid costume did nothing to help her hide from their eyes as the two full grown anthros looked down upon her. They were tall, purple, and both sporting long, flaccid cocks that hung over the edge of the bed that they were sitting on. Rainbow’s large tongue lapped over her lips at the sight of them, her only lament about them was that they appeared to be just barely smaller then her mistress’s.

Finally, the one on the right who sat straight backed, but had short hair that framed her face, put her book down and turned towards Rainbow, her body in full control minus the massive prick between her legs that swayed with the movement. It even slapped against her thigh, and Rainbow felt herself shudder at the sound. It was one all to familiar to her, and she whimpered slightly as she tried to remind herself that they were not her mistress, no matter how much they looked like her.

The one that had moved finally spoke now though, standing tall as she patted her legs. “Welcome, toy. Princess Twilight has told us about your roll in the castle, and that if we desired a chance to pleasure ourselves while we were here, we should await for you here. While I am not like my twins in following their more scholary desires,” she said with a small smile, “I’ve always wanted to dump a load inside my own Rainbow Dash, and seeing her in a position usually reserved for foals…” Her smile grew as one of her hands firmly grasped her cock, running her hand along it, and only stopping at the tip, which was a few centimeters away from her knee, unlike Rainbow’s mistress.

Rainbow flicked her tail back over her nethers, swallowing hard as she took in the information. She would have liked being told by her mistress first, but she wasn’t all that surprised if she did tell them such. In fact, she might have left Rainbow out just to give her a reason to punish the slutty pegasus, but if she didn’t… “Th-this form is a f-form of fealty to my princess. It doesn’t imply anything else, and it’s,” she swallowed hard, watching as the standing Twilight continuing to stroke her shaft, her body wanting nothing more than to stop her from having to do so so that Rainbow could gag on it, but she couldn’t, and that was a torture in and of itself.

The standing Twilight grinned, running her hand through her hair as she let her cock go, allowing it to stay only half erect for now. After all, as Princess had told them, her little toy wasn’t as insincere in her love as she had expected her to be. “Well, we can wait for Princess if you need, but you should know what to call us at least while we wait then. I’m Advisor, a Twilight in a timeline where I became Celestia’s top advisor on how to run the country, and returned from Ponyville after the whole Nightmare Moon mess. And this,” gesturing to the second Twilight, “is Student. In her timeline, Sunset never left and became the element of magic while she merely continued with her studies. We’re both very eager to see how you feel, so come here already!”

Rainbow jumped a little at how demanding the tone got, as if this Twilight thought she deserved more respect then her own mistress, but her hooves did take a few step forwards against her will. They wanted to serve. They wanted relief. They wanted to obey both of them.

Fortunately, Student helped in calming Rainbow down a little. “N-No! I n-n-never said th-that! Y-y-you just dragged me h-here so I would watch!”

Unfortunately, Advisor swung it back towards two, two Twilights wanting Rainbow by snapping back, “Oh, and who stripped down with me to wait? Face it, you may not know her, but you may never have another chance to get fucked by anything other than your own drake.”

“I like how Spike fucks me…”

“And do you ever get to fuck him?”

Student was silent as Rainbow stepped forward again. She… She wouldn’t go any further, having closed half of the distance to the two of them, but here she would stay firm. She… She was Twilight’s toy, not… Twilight’s. Ugh. Rainbow became a pet and maid to avoid this sort of confusion!

It was made only worse by the other, small differences with them, like the fact that Advisor had small, almost miniscule nipples that she wanted to suck on, while Student had breasts larger than her own mistresses that she wanted to nuzzle into and sleep with, as her own mistress’s were just too small. Rainbow bent down, her ass sticking in the air as she whimpered to herself, unable to figure out what to do.

Luckily for the little pet, she never had to think. She merely had to prove that she deserved, and, possibly more importantly, wanted what was to come. That just the sight of something similar could set her on fire, but not make her betray her oaths and collar.

And thus, Rainbow’s eyes widened as her mistress descended like an angel on high, her massive prick, that was easily as big as one of her own hooves, erect as she descended on high. She wasted no time as her wings flapped, pushing Rainbow down, and her skirt up, with touching the ground, but instead followed a practiced, fluid motion as she landed with her tip penetrating her toy.

Rainbow’s eyes almost popped out of her skull as, despite the probably hundreds of times Twilight had done this to her, she was kept almost as tight as a virgin, but with the joy of an old masochist as she began being split open. Twilight didn’t have to stop or pull out, not in her favorite hole. She knew every twist, turn, and block, using the exact pressure that she needed to make a bulge begin showing in Rainbow’s stomach as she was lifted into the air, suspended by the impressive member.

To the other two Twilights this appeared to be one, smooth motion that was effortless to her that left Rainbow a panting mess, her hooves kicking uselessly in the air as Twilight gripped her own cock through her toy. “Sweet Celestia…”

Twilight shivered as she felt her old sheath writhe around her, letting her cock shake inside of her little slut a little as she gave herself a minor handjob, before finally leaning into Rainbow’s ear. “I know I don’t normally lift you like this, but I couldn’t resist with how desperate you looked. Besides, you deserve a treat after you were so sweet in your duties. Then again, while I called them here for information, well…”

Twilight’s hand abruptly slapped Rainbow’s exposed, open pussy, and the pegasus neighed in response, her arousal spattering onto the ground from the pain, showing just how aroused she was as she kept experiencing mini climaxes on her mistress’s cock. It was all thanks to years of training and magic by her mistress though, and while the two foreigner’s continued to gawk, the two treated it like nothing, Twilight even being able to calmly say, “I wanted to see how many of my cocks you could take, so I hope you don’t disappoint, whore.”

Advisor blinked for a few moments, rock hard just like her compatriot, but paralyzed. Like many a politician, she talked a good talk, but now that she was being prodded to actually do this… and she knew this mare, kind of. She would have to at some point look at the leader of her own Wonderbolts with the image of her being filled with her own cock. Of her begging for more of her hot seed. That was…

“Oh, what the egghead turned asshole can’t get a date? Maybe if you weren’t some futa freak, I be-” “Hnng.”

Advisor felt the muscles in her neck try to resist as Princess forced her to her knees, her fingers up to their third knuckle in Rainbow’s pussy as she stared down the diplomat. Somehow, it was extremely effective, though that may have been the absolute steel that were in her words as she warned, “You do not fuck my maid like that. She is the love of my life, and I won’t have anger be included in this.”

Rainbow responded to the words by screaming, though that may have been from the next deep impaling she took in her ass, which would also explain the spray of arousal that came from the little pet. However… Advisor’s job was to read people. Their messages, their words, she needed to be able to tell if they were lying, and she began figuring out just how much of a gift this was for the slutty pegasus.

And even if her own was a prick, she was still her friend, so this one definitely deserved a good present, and Princess seemed to see that change in her mind as Advisor was freed of her magic.

From there, the diplomat was meticulous, standing up, dusting herself off, and then walking over. Her cock was harder than it ever had been, but you wouldn’t tell from the look on her face. After all, she didn’t want to show just how pent up she was, even if she had to some extent by snapping at Student. No, she would make sure Rainbow felt how long she’d gone without getting fucked.

That was a rough sentiment Princess could get behind, knowing how it felt when she got home after a month away from her pet and helped spread Rainbow’s legs for the other Twilight. Advisor eagerly grabbed Rainbow’s hind legs, finally getting them to stop their flailing as the toy put her forehooves onto Advisor’s shoulders.

Advisor smiled at Rainbow, who panted, twitching in anticipation for what was to come, especially as she noted that while Advisor wasn’t as long as her mistress, she was a little wider, which she actually sympathized the poor mare for. After all, while there were spells to help in such cases, many mares and stallions would run away from the sheer size. Rainbow instead just took the prompting from her mistress pausing for a moment to say, “Th-Thank you for stuffing this maid’s filthy hole, and she looks forward to having to clean all excess cum with her mouth.”

Advisor paused for a few moments before looking up at Princess. “You do not know how much I wish I could make mine like this.”

Princess grinned back, before stroking her cock again while it was buried inside of her maid as she said, “It helps that we both found our place when I began facefucking her while we were drunk. She couldn’t speak properly for a week.”

Advisor grinned as her flared tip stroked Rainbow’s nethers. “Well, let’s see then if we can’t make her unable to- Aaaah!” She wanted to finish her insult, but she hadn’t expected Rainbow to be as tight as she was as she had slammed her hips forward. She had expected it to be loose, worn out, and thus she’d get in in one stroke. A hole in one. Instead, she barely managed to stuff half her cock in, and she was already caught in a tight vice. “Oh, Luna, help me!”

Princess grinned wide, feeling her ‘sister’s girth grinding against her as she slammed forward, forcing the gasping Rainbow between them to be slid further along the long, hard shaft of Advisor. Advisor bit into her lip, breathing hard as sweat began to pour down the side of her face, before looking at Princess who now cupped one of her cheeks. “Luna can’t help with that hole. She prefers facefucking my little toy.”

Advisor chuckled a little as she pushed back against the other, cocky bi- “Mmmf. Fuck. I don’t want to cum to soon, but your little slut is better than fucking Celestia!”

Student gasped from on the bed, shouting out, “You’ve fucked Celestia?”

Princess and Advisor replied in unison, “Fucked, and been fucked.” They then looked at each other, the same gears turning as they asked the other, “How did you respond to her glamour drop-”

Princess was cut off by Advisor screaming, finally having slammed the last of her cock into Rainbow and feeling the little bitch try to tear her dick off with how hard she came from both Twilight’s full prongs inside of her. It was too much for her, and she was soon sending a geyser of his thick seed right into Rainbow’s room while the little pet screamed, her eyes rolling back in the rolling orgasm she was stuck in. Not that it was that simple, with Princess grabbing Advisor’s ass and pulling her in. It made sure that she couldn’t get out while the well trained hole teased every inch of her shaft, helping her pump more and more of her seed into Rainbow. By the time she was done, she had managed to give the little toy a baby bump, and a steady stream of white goop that splattered onto the floor.

Princess chuckled as Advisor stepped back. The poor mare was panting from the intensity of it, though still managed a glare at the one who’d brought her here when Princess teased, “Something like that when I saw her cock touch the ground. Poor Dashie couldn’t move with all the fantasies that went through her mind looking at it. Now,” Princess said as her horn glowed and Advisor’s cock perked right back up, “I didn’t bring you here to only give my cum dump only one deposit. Not when your cock grinds against mine so nicely!”

Advisor stroked her own cock, panting as she wondered for a moment where she could get ahold of such a… potent spell, before finally glancing at Student. “Well, I’m taking her pussy again, but I’m getting a little tired of the toy’s squawks. Think you could help me with that?”

Student, who had been cupping her heavy chest, jumped at the proposition, waving her hands in the air while her fully erect cock sent precum flying onto the ground in front of her. “N-No! I mean, I don’t even know this mare in my timeline. Not only that, but the pony body is so small and compact that three cocks would likely harm it far more than make it enjoyable for any of us.”

Rainbow blinked as she heard the reminder of the fact that there was indeed a third mistress in the room. A third, fat cock that was waiting to be plunged into her. That could only add to her credibility as a broken little slut whose only worth was proven by her fealty to her princess and cocks.

She didn’t speak though. Not while her primary mistress continued to fuck her. It was a toy’s place to be plowed, not speak. In fact, if possible, her mouth should be part of what was being fucked, and her mouth opened in desire, her tongue hanging out as she panted for the third cock.

Advisor glanced back at Rainbow, licking her lips as she took in the lewd body, and taking a hard heel turn in order to swing her whole weight into her first thrust back into her preferred hole, the sperm already there making a loud, slurping sound as it was displaced. Student’s eyes widened as more of the thick spunk sprayed onto the ground, and even Princess took a sharp breath in as suddenly the other massive prick pressed against hers, tightening up her favorite cock sleeve. “Fu-”

Rainbow’s body shook as the second climax from her mistresses came, this time from her true mistress, and the other Twilight’s could practically watch as her own, healthy load of seed blasted into Rainbow’s stomach. Rainbow was forced to grind against Advisor from the force of Princess’s last slam, and the poor, regal Twilight got to watch in slight horror as their host showed just how dominant she was like this. All the while while she came, Princess talked to Rainbow about how disgusting she was, her magic making Rainbow move in just a right way that-

Advisor blinked as cum spurted onto Rainbow’s tongue, having shot straight through the mare’s stomach and landing there. She could only imagine the sort of hell that did to somepony’s system, but all it seemed to do to this slut was make her cum harder as she found out by the grasping on her cock. “Fuck! What sort of freaks are you two?”

Princess smiled, her magic not making her miss a beat as her normal, hard and fast rhythm came back against Rainbow’s intestines, and she whispered into her pet’s ear, “A very special kind, right pet?”

Rainbow nodded, but there was something stuck in her mind now. Something that her true mistress must have known would come with giving her a taste of cum. Even while she was in the throws of ecstacy, her mind going blank at times as Advisor and Princess began matching rhythms, she… She wanted more.

Princess grabbed Rainbow’s jaw, turning her open mouth towards Student. “Alright, bookworm, enough playing around. Get over here and tear this little throat up with your cock before I make you.”

Student bit her lip as her fingers curled around the edge of her bed. She… She couldn’t actually do that, could she? No, no. She was fine with just being fucked by Spike. She was fine with not knowing how another mare’s mouth felt. Besides, what if she became a complete deviant like these two. She would just have to be happy with her own ha-

“Get over here, you dumb bitch, and fuck me like the whore I a-Hurk!” Rainbow’s words stopped as the black collar around her neck tightened to the point of choking her, and her head was yanked back by Princess who glared down at her little pet. She didn’t say anything until Rainbow’s body was twitching from the need for oxygen, and tears were coming into her eyes.

“You beg and ask. You do not demand. Do it right.”

Rainbow gasped for air, shaking as her mistress didn’t miss a beat, having never stopped pounding away at her. Advisor was a little slower, but at this point she didn’t question much of this. Student was the problem, and Rainbow used every ounce of control she could manage to keep her voice down as she panted out, “Pl-Please, m-mistress, l-let me b-b-be, Ah! Blessedbythetasteofyourcockandseed!”

Princess ran a hand through her pet’s hair. She would need to ‘punish’ her for fucking up the second half of her beg, but she couldn’t blame her. She didn’t know if she’d even be able to talk with two cocks inside of her, let alone with the rest that had been happening to her.

Besides, it did the trick as Student walked over, her long, but not very thick, cock pointed straight for Rainbow’s mouth as her far less powerful switch finally was flipped. She needed to see what dominating this bitch was like, and seeing her wide, open mouth was simply too tantalizing.

After some reworking of positions, she even got it as Rainbow’s tongue lapped at her precum soaked tip, sending shivers up Student’s body before magic from both Advisor and Princess grabbed her by the ass. They weren’t about to watch their toy be used for foreplay after all, and thus pulled the bitch foreward, surprising even Rainbow as a new bulge formed in her throat where the new cock was. Unlike when Advisor did this though, Rainbow’s trained jaw and tongue helped make sure that every inch of her sank in at once, and Student’s eyes rolled back as she found even her balls being sucked on by the lewd pegasus.

To say the least, Student showed off just how pathetic she was as she became the first one pump chump of the group. Her body shook, unable to move to let Rainbow breathe as she came, though Princess made sure that didn’t go too far. Just enough to make the toy light headed, otherwise she got limp, and no one could have as much fun with that.

However, as the thick cum was pumped into her, Rainbow felt a surge of magic flow through her, and her eyes widened in faux terror. She knew this spell. It was used on her and Twilight when they needed to make something a quickie, or when Twilight wanted to force Rainbow to collapse.

It was designed to force an orgasm from all hit by it, and Twilight used it a second after rising Student back up. Student screamed, “Ah!” as she was hit by the sudden burst of elation, while Advisor bent over, her body trembling as it found its release once again.

Princess merely looked into the shifting shadows for the mare who had been waiting for such a signal. Not that she didn’t enjoy the moment either, as it was starting to get a little hard to thrust into her pet’s stomach. Not that Rainbow was getting tighter, she didn’t know if that was possible, but because everytime she slammed back into it while cum sprayed into it, it felt like she was having to push past at least a liter of her and Student’s thick seed in the process.

“Hmm, she looks almost like a stuck pig like this. If she can’t handle anymore cum though, how do you think she’ll handle me?”

Everypony except Princess turned to the new voice, recognizing it as a deeper, more sultry version of many of theirs voices, and Advisor and Student paled.

Rainbow came at the sight of her.

This Twilight’s coat was at least one shade darker than the rest of theirs, and she stood almost two feet taller than them. As she was at least equally as well endowed as any of the others for her size, her cock was set to match with another six inches, and at least three more in width. Her own breasts, kept up by black metal that was at the top of a dark blue corset, were at least as big as any of theirs heads, and bigger than anypony’s, and her black and green eyes shown as she smiled down at the scared faces.

Princess treated this as nothing, giggling as she said, “Come Ty-,” she paused, but one look from Advisor told her that the diplomat had caught the slip of the tongue, and they’d likely need to talk about that. It didn’t help of course that this new Twilight was the only other one that was an alicorn as she stretched her wings out and caused Student to whimper in fear. “Archmage. With your level of magic, I’m sure you can make sure she doesn’t die as you join me back here.”

Advisor, forgetting for a moment about the problem with this Twilight, shouted, “How do you plan to fit that behemoth in her ass? I’d be hard pressed to put a piece of pocky into her pussy!”

Archmage stepped next to Princess, smirking down at Advisor as her horn began glowing. “Oh, an adapted torture spell can make sure that her body doesn’t tear, only stretches. It will feel like it should be tearing, but with proper modifications Princess and I have discussed, it should be quite nice for the little slut.”


Rainbow at this point wiggled her ass, trusting her mistress implicitly, but it was Student’s turn to talk. “Torture spells? I-I don’t know if I want you using instruments of evil on a mare we’re all supposed to like,” she then looked at Princess and pleaded, “R--Right?”

Princess put a hand on Rainbow’s back, wincing a little as Archmage’s behemoth began to push against her own in an attempt to open even the smallest gap for the mare. “We, nnf, can discuss this later. Right now, she is here for the same reason you two are, and while, yes, I wished to keep her a secret from you two, I let her come out for my little maid, and I would appreciate it if you two would continue to fuck her since I need to stop while we work on this.”

Advisor and Student looked at each other, before Advisor let out a small chuckle before slamming her cock back into Rainbow Dash.

After all, if Princess was lying about caring about this slut, why did she stop her earlier?

Student was more hesitant, but soon gave into Rainbow’s lapping. After all, the little maid had figured out that she wasn’t getting what she wanted until the two were back to fucking her. She didn’t know what she had done to be so blessed by her mistress, but she would do good in return. She would make sure these Twilights had a reason to like her when they were done.

And then Rainbow felt as her asshole began to stretch. Rainbow had been fucked in every other hole, sure, and she had even been triple teamed before. However, Advisor had been right. She simply took too high quality of cocks to take more than one in any of her holes. So, to feel her body literally breaking to take in more of Twilight…

One inch and her eyes began to water.

Two inches wider and she began to find herself unable to breathe from the pain and pleasure, a feeling that caught Student off guard as she found herself unable to move.

Three inches, and Archmage began to push her tip into her ass.

Four inches, and everything went black.

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Archmage huffed as she slammed her cock forward, enjoying the fact that, with the other Twilights asleep now, she could finally have a proper turn with Rainbow. After all, even after as much as they stretched her ass out, Archmage had only ever gotten maybe half of her cock through Rainbow before the little bitch that was Student got in the way of her continuing.

Now though, even while Rainbow herself was asleep, she was able to slide her cock all the way through her. Past her annoying intestines, through her stomach, and Princess, the last Twilight who was awake past her, kissed her cock when it came out of Rainbow’s throat. Well, actually, it was a little sweeter, as Princess kissed her maid in the process, the three moaning as Rainbow’s body fell limp in a final, shuddering orgasm.

Archmage knew that Rainbow would in the morning, along with her final action as she ripped her cock out of the flesh sleeve, covering it in juices, her magic making sure she didn’t actually hurt the pony so she could cover the last of the maid in her own cum as she finished the spell she’d been working on during this final fuck.

“They will not remember that I was here. Instead, they’ll think you cloned yourself. Well, all except the birthday girl that is.”

Twilight smiled a little as she stared at her little Dashie, who looked so peaceful despite having her body so thoroughly ravaged. They had gone for hours, possibly even days, and it was only through sheer force of magic that her and Archmage were still conscious. She was happy that Rainbow Dash had only spent parts of it unconscious though. Making her pet pass out was something she didn’t get to do very often anymore, and she was happy to put her in such bliss over and over again. “I still don’t know how I feel about warping their memories.”

Archmage sat beside Twilight, sighing as she stretched her neck. “They would not understand. A tyrant is only ever that. Never a teacher, a sage, a… A fool.” She hung her heard, wisps of green appearing where tears should have before she snapped her eyes back open and looked to Twilight. “As for your concern, it is a valid one. I haven’t felt my invigorated so thoroughly in a long time as it was watching that little mare submit to you.”

Twilight sighed, staring at the ground before Archmage laid a hand on her back. “I do not believe it is one you will act on. You are not alone after all. You may be tempted by domination. Even seduced by it, but tell me, do you think Rainbow will stay if you went there? If you claimed other pets, let alone a reality?”

Twilight was silent for a few moments, staring at her maid, before shaking her head and burying her head into her hands. “I don’t know. When we’re apart, I think it’s impossible, but when I do things like choke her, listen to her beg for me to never leave, and feel how she clings to me in fear…”

“And how do you feel when she clings to you?”

Twilight smiled a little, remembering the last time Rainbow needed a night of being herself again and feeling the weak anthro body beneath her. “I… I cannot imagine anything greater.”

Archmage nodded, standing on unsteady hooves as she stood before the scared version of herself. The younger version. The one she wished she was. “Then I would not fret. I lusted after something more, but like tonight for your dear maid, this was more than she could have ever desired, but,” She said as she placed a hand on Twilight’s cock, “what will the thing she is always loyal to is your cock, and you will always be loyal to her, no matter how much others may tempt you.”

Twilight smiled, staring at the floor before glancing back at Archmage who was limping towards the shadows to hide in once more. She wanted to say something to the god who called herself a fool, but she knew that she could only get so much from this version of herself. Besides, tonight was not about her.

It was about her dear little maid, who she still was willing to hug, even with her current state of mess, and the small flutter in her heart from Rainbow’s small moan sent shivers down her body. Shivers she clung to in hopes that her evil counterpart was right that she would indeed only need to control this, rather than all of Equestria as she was tempted to on some days.