The Sub Becomes The Dom
The morning dew laid heavy on the vacant Ponyville streets. The moon was still low on the horizon. It Outlined the landscape in an eerie, dark glow. A lone stallion rushed through the skies in stealthy silence, saddlebags draped across his back. His destination sat in the distance, the sun barely peeking through the sky as it slowly rises to begin the day. The pegasus was in luck, a window lay open giving him full access to the prize he needed. Landing on the bed he tried not to disturb the sleeping unicorn, knowing how much his beauty sleep meant to him. The alabaster unicorn stirred pulling off his sleep mask, he looked through the window to see Blitz.
“Blitz?! What in Equestria are you doing here at this hour?” The once sleeping stallion’s- Elusive is his name- horn glowed sapphire blue using his magic to levitate the clock from his nightstand, the large red numbers read ‘6:35 AM.’ “Blitz, my dear friend...what could possibly be so important you had to wake me up at this hour?” Elusive grabbed the pegasus by the ear with his magic, pulling his muzzle near inches away from his own.
“Ow! Geez Lucy, if you wanted a kiss all you had to do is ask.” Releasing the stallion’s ear, Elusive daintily made his way from under Blitz and trotted towards the bathroom. Washing the remnants of his nightly mud mask from his face revealing a pure white coat underneath.
“You are childish as ever Blitz, I swear you could learn to use a little etiquette...at least once every eon.” He turned to Blitz, “So now that I’ve been rudely woken up by a brash, bullheaded pegasus. What can I do to help you, Blitz?”
“Well, you know how Dusk is always in control in the bedroom.” A crimson hue flushes his face and ears, as the stallion tries to suppress a moan or whimper.
“Of course I do darling, especially after the multiple stories you keep telling about Dusk and your bedroom activities… which I’ve already told you is not polite dinner conversation hundreds of times already.”
“Yeah yeah yeah,” He rolled his eyes, “polite noble stuff, anyways I’m getting sick and tired of always being controlled by him… I mean I know for a fact Dusk is a switch we talked all about it after the multiple times he’s taken me to the ‘Clocktower’. Hell, our first three-way he had some mare be the dom over him, but he won’t let me even talk about being dominant. He always fights back anytime I’m even remotely close to taking control away from him.”
Blitz’s head was swimming with erotic fantasies of his dominant side finally getting room to breathe. His mind ablaze with lustful ideas of bending Dusk over his desk and plowing his plot till he couldn’t walk straight. He couldn’t even notice the tip of his member poking free from his sheath, that is until Elusive brought his mind back to reality.
“So you want to be more of a dom in the bedroom, so you came to another dom to give you some pointers? I honestly think it’d be easier if you simply talked this out with Dusk but-”
“Who said anything about you teaching me anything?” Blitz’s brash bravado cut Elusive off mid-sentence, his face turning a bright red too from the slight annoyance he was trying to hide.
“Then what did you need my help with, Blitz?” Elusive slightly muffled through his clenched and grinding teeth.
“Well, you remember how Dusk turned us into Breezies that one time? Ever since then I’ve been begging him to change me into something totally awesome. I’ve even asked him to do it for one of our roleplays, but he keeps going on and on about how ‘dangerous’ and ‘catastrophic’ it could be. So I snagged the book he used to change us into Breezies, and I figured since you were a unicorn you could change me into a griffin to finally get my chance to rock Dusk’s world and show him how awesome I can be as a dom.”
“Blitz...I think you may have hit your head one too many times, you heard what Dusk said it’s ‘dangerous’ and possibly ‘catastrophic’ and that’s coming from an alicorn prince. So why would you think I would try to do something that a pony as powerful with magic as Dusk Shine is wary to do?”
“Come on Lucy, you know Dusk worries too much about every little detail. It just doesn’t want me to be bigger and stronger than he is, I mean if you don’t wanna help me that’s fine. I’m sure I can find some other unicorn who’s up for the job.” Blitz walks towards the window, hiding the sly smile from Elusive knowing his generosity wouldn’t let Rainbow leave. ‘3…..2…..1’
“Blitz...I absolutely can not have you going out looking for some ‘random unicorn’ to do something like this. You need a unicorn you can trust, and one who won’t do something twisted for their own sick gain. Fine, Blitz I’ll help you, be back here around seven tonight. I should have everything figured out by then, and don’t you dare breathe a word of this to Dusk Shine...he’d kill me if he found out I’m doing this for you.” Elusive only saw a flurry of feathers and cyan fur flying towards him, wrapping his entire form in a tight embrace.
“Thanks, Elusive, I really owe you one...in fact, I know the perfect way to pay you back.”
“How do you plan to do that Blitz?”
“Let’s just say I’ve got a few ideas for you to try with Applejack, I’m sure he’d really enjoy them.” An evil grin screwed up on Blitz’s muzzle, as he flew towards his job at the Ponyville Weather HQ. His brain pumping as hard as his wings were with thoughts of the night ahead of him.
With his workday drawing to a close, an overly excited pegasus shot through the skies of Ponyville landing on the doorstep of the Carousel Boutique. Blitz flung the door open, a white ball of fuzz bolted from the room as Blitz trotted in looking for the unicorn how’d make his fantasies a reality. Rainbow could make out the outline of Elusive’s mane on the couch, small sparks from his horn indicated he was using magic.
“Blitz even though you so rudely barged in here without my permission, I do have wondrous news. I was able to get that spell working rather easily, in fact, I don’t see why Dusk was having such a problem with it.” The book levitated in his magic, as he sauntered over towards the full-grown stallion who looked like a colt in a candy store.
“I knew you could do it, Lucy, Dusk was just being a stick in the mud...I knew you’d come through for me.”
“Yes well, I’m glad you had so much faith in me Blitz, but darling I really think you should just talk to Dusk instead of going through all this.”
“He never listens to me when it comes to this kind of stuff, he always thinks he’s in charge and I’m getting kind of pissed off. So no, I’m going to teach Dusk a lesson. Go ahead Elusive work your magic.” He stood still as a sparkling blue hue engulfed Blitz’s body, a slight twinge of pain and heat cascaded over Blitz’s body. His wings elongating matching the span of a true griffon. His front hooves narrowed out into paws with three sharp talons on each, his fur turned to cyan blue feathers from head to tail. Finally, his muzzle morphed into a sharp beak of a predator ready to hunt his prey.
“There...you...are….Blitz. Hopefully, this will help you get through to Dusk if he’s got as much of a submissive side as you say he does.” Taking a look at himself in the mirror he was almost shocked, touching himself for the first time was a real shock as he gave his beak a few experimental snaps.
“Thanks a bunch Elusive, I still owe you one...remember I told you I’d help you with AJ...Let’s just say he won’t see it coming. Anyways gotta go Lucy, I’ve got a certain alicorn to put in his place.”
Flying off through the open window, Blitz bolted towards the Castle Of Friendship. Flying in stealthy through Dusk’s open bedroom window. Blitz sat in the darkness his mind whirling with ideas of taking control for the first time ever. As night fell he knew his chance was finally coming. The door to the bedroom swung open, Dusk lazily walked towards the bed before flopping down. Blitz closed the door quietly behind him, as he readied himself to pounce.
“Who's there? I’ll have you know you’re t-trespassing in the Castle of Friendship, if you don’t leave immediately, I’ll call my guards.”
“Oh we both know you don’t have guards yet, little Dusky, now why don’t you be a good little pet and accept your fate.” Dusk knew Blitz’s attempts at being dominant anywhere, instead of laughing it off this time the stallion decided he’d play along with him a little, especially since Rainbow had been such a good pet recently.
“H-How did you know that?” An attempt at a nervous quiver rang out in Dusk’s voice.
“Let’s just say I’ve been waiting a long time to do this.” Blitz finally revealed himself, leaping from the shadows holding Dusk down with his strong talons and larger mass.
“B-Blitz…? How did you do this?”
“It’s not important how I did this, what is important is what I’m going to do to my little stallion now.” Dusk’s horn glowed his attempts to teleport were dashed, as an inhibitor ring was placed over the stallions glowing horn canceling out any and all magic. “Ah ah ah, I figured you’d try and use your magic to get away from me...so I just picked this little thing up to stop you from doing just that.” Rainbow’s talon tapping at the tip of Dusk’s horn, as his magic fizzled in small bursts on top.
Dusk heart raced in his chest as he felt genuine fear, and yet it was one of the hottest things he’d ever experienced. His member even began poking through his sheath, hardening against his captor’s belly and chest. His cock throbbed lightly as he finally reached full mast, opening his eyes Dusk could see the predatory glare he was getting from Blitz.
“Aww. My little pet is really such a slut, that the thought of being raped by a griffin is a turn on to you.” Rainbow own member began to grow, his cock had changed as well. His new cock was a bright red complete with six-inch knot at its base. “Now, how about I take care of my pet before I completely own you.” Blitz slowly licked his way down Dusk’s chest, his avian tongue hitting every sensitive spot on Dusk’s body. A light moan escapes Dusk’s clenched muzzle involuntarily. He looked down and he sees Rainbow arriving at his destination, Dusk’s massive throbbing member complete with a small speck of pre-cum oozing from the tip. “You really are my slut.”
Rainbow slowly dragged his tongue from the base of Dusk’s shaft to the very tip, licking the small amount of pre off before slowly plunging his slender tongue onto Dusk tip. Dusk almost passed out in ecstasy as the tongue wiggled around his tip. He could tell Dusk was sensitive there, and that he had gotten rather close to cumming. Blitz didn’t want him to cum so early, so he had his tongue retreat back into his mouth. He could see the pleading look in Dusk’s eyes, but he didn’t keep going.
“So tell me pet, what is it you want me to do?” A long silence was only followed by a heavy moan as Blitz slowly rubbed Dusk’s shaft with one talon while using the other to keep the stallion immobile. “Come on, what does my little slut want?”
“I-I want you to su-suck my co-cock Blitz.”
“That’s really cute pet, but I’m not Blitz you will address me as you're supposed to. So I’ll ask again, what does my pet want from me?”
“Would you pl-please suck my cock Ma-Mas-Master?”
“That’s better pet, I guess you have earned your reward after all.”
Leaning back in Blitz gave one final lick to the tip, before slowly sinking it into his beak. A feat which was much harder with such a smaller opening to work with, flicking his tongue over the sensitive head as he bobbed his head up and down. With playtime over Rainbow wanted to get to his main course, pushing his head fully down he hilted Dusk’s fourteen-inch member in his throat. Which was to much for the stallion to bare, with a mix between a whimper and moan he came shooting shot after shot of seed down Rainbow’s convulsing throat. Rainbow took his mouth off Dusk’s cock as he came. Rainbow pointed Dusk’s member towards the stallion’s, letting the last few spurts paint his muzzle white. “Isn’t that cute. A little helpless slut covered in his own cum. But now it’s time for a certain pet to return the favor.”
Flipping to his side Dusk came face to face with Blitz’s throbbing red cockhead, a small stream of clear pre-cum covered the surface of his cock and knot. A forceful claw was placed on the back of Dusk’s head which pulled him closer to his cock. He opened his muzzle to welcome in the first few inches of Blitz’s tapered cock. His lips meeting Blitz’s growing knot with every downward stroke. Blitz’ tip leaking pre quicker than Dusk’s throat could handle. His knot soon was swollen to a full five inches in diameter, Blitz was quickly approaching his first climax with little care for his pets comfort. Blitz pushed Dusk’s head down harder his knot barely forcing past Dusk’s teeth. Locking Blitz’s member in Dusk’s muzzle the tip sitting mere centimeters from Dusk’s throat. His cock throbbed as he painted Dusk’s throat with thick volleys of griffin cum. After several seconds Blitz’s knot was finally shrunk, all the while his pet continued to lick at the shrinking knot until the member popped free of his lips.
“Th-That was pretty go-good pet, but I’ve still got one more round in me...and there’s still one hole I haven’t used yet.” Dusk’s breathing heavy as he took in a few deep breaths, his breath hitched in his throat as he felt Rainbow’s dexterous tongue probing at his tight plot hole. Pushing past his barrier, sinking his tongue a few inches into his hole. Swirling his tongue around, he lubed up the stallions hole, before pulling his tongue from his pet’s slightly used hole.
“Now just a little lube for me,” He put a squirt of cold lube over the length of his red-hot cock. He moaned a bit as he did, “I wouldn’t want to hurt my little pet… But I'm not saying I won’t punish you if you're bad.” He grabbed his pet’s hoof. He finished putting the lube on rather slowly, “Now I want you to take a deep breath pet.” Even with his more dominant bravado, Dusk could sense the caring side of Rainbow underneath the predator towering over him, creeping him with both fear and erotic pleasure.
“J-Just go slow please Mas-Master, you know I’m not us-used to this yet.” Dusk voice quivering with fear and lust, his cock once again rock hard and throbbing shooting small amounts of pre onto his chest and belly.
“I promise to be gentle...at least at first pet.” Placing both talons on the alicorn’s hips Blitz pulled Dusk’s rump to the edge of the bed, his lubed cock throbbing mere inches away from Dusk’s hole. As the tip made contact Dusk’s breath hitched, as his muscles tightened trying to push away the foreign invader. “Just take a deep breath Dusk, I promise you’ll enjoy this.”
For the first time in the entire night Blitz actually fully broke character, reassuring his partner in his moment of doubt. Taking a deep breath Dusk was finally able to loosen his muscles giving Rainbow easy access to his insides. Giving several experimental prods Rainbow finally sank the head of his dick into Dusk hole, which immediately tightened back up before slowly releasing its vice-like grip. Giving Dusk time to adjust Rainbow rubbed his sides with his talons, comforting the stallion as he got used to Blitz’s size.
“Go, ah-ahead Blitz, I’m good.”
“I thought I told you to call me Master, but I guess I can let my pet slide this one time.” Blitz’s voice returned to its dominant tone, sending a chill up Dusk’s spine causing him to whimper slightly as Blitz slowly pushed the rest of his member into Dusk’s stretched hole. His knot being the only thing remaining outside of the stallion.
With a deep breath Blitz pull out until only the tip remained inside before slamming his full length back inside Dusk. Both lovers gasped in bliss as Blitz’s knot once again bounced against Dusk’s plot. Blitz threw all caution to the wind, knowing he wouldn’t last long with how tight Dusk was squeezing him. He picked up the pace, now plowing into the stallion at full speed. Just as he neared his climaxed he pulled out just short, leaving both of them a panting mess of lust. Hobbling over to the bed, the Griffin laid down on his back, motioning for the stallion to come over Dusk on shaky legs walked towards the seductive griffin.
“Now one last thing before we finish the night pet…” He used his talon to hold his throbbing cock straight up. “I want you to turn around and ride me.” Before he could even ask a question Dusk felt compelled to listen to his master. He turned around so his flank faced away from the griffin. Dusk slowly inched his plot downward, his well-used hole looming just over Blitz’s spurting tip. As Dusk sank down to the knot he felt the small twinge of pain he felt earlier, as he wiggled his hips back and forth on the swollen knot. “Dusk...take one last deep breath, I’m going to push you down okay.” Dusk could only give a simple nod as he was now in a ‘drunk on lust’ state, with one deep breath he released all restrictions for his partner.
Taking advantage of his opening, Blitz pushed down on Dusk’s shoulders while simultaneously pumping his cock upward. After a few painful moments of stretching, Blitz’s knot popped inside Dusk’s entrance. Blitz was already so close, and soon he was pushed over the edge. He roared through the most powerful orgasm he’d ever had. He put his talon on Dusk and quickly rubbed his stallionhood, bringing the stallion closer to his own climax. With one final pump of his hips, causing his member to rub over Dusk’s prostate, he was finally pushed over the edge. Firing loads of cum over Rainbow’s talons, his own chest and stomach and a few shots even landed on his muzzle and Rainbow’s beak. Breathing heavily in their afterglow, the two stayed connected the knot keeping either from moving much, the two took the time to rest in each other embrace neither saying a word as the ran over the experience in their heads. After a twenty minutes of talking about their experience, Rainbow’s knot had finally shrunk enough to pull out of his lover.
“Alright Dusk, I think I’m able to pull out now.” Holding on tightly to Rainbow’s powerful form, Rainbow slowly pulled his knot out from Dusk’s cum-filled hole. A trickle of cum poured slowly down the stallion’s plot, landing on the bed and Rainbow’s deflating member. “S-So how’d you like it? I-I wasn’t too rough on you was I?” Falling flat beside Blitz Dusk finally breathed a sigh of relief, cuddling close to Blitz’s chest feathers.
“No Blitz it was perfect, honestly I never thought I had a side of myself like that. Much less one that you could bring out, no offense Blitz. I guess the whole ‘predator/prey’ thing is a real turn on for me. I-I’m really sorry I didn’t listen to you before Blitz, I always felt like you enjoyed being submissive and honestly I was kind of scared to let you fully take control like that. Not that I don’t trust you, you’ve always been a sub I was afraid you’d take it too far. I’m s-sorry I didn’t trust you enough Blitz.”
“Hey it’s okay, no harm done. I just feel bad I did this now...don’t get me wrong it was totally awesome and something I’d definitely love to do again...it’s just…” Blitz couldn’t even look his coltfriend in the eye, averting his gaze to anywhere else.
“Come on Blitz it’s okay you can tell me anything, that’s the point of ‘aftercare’ remember it’s not just for the sub but for the dom to be comforted knowing that it’s okay...what’s wrong Blitz?”
“I-I just feel like I took advantage of you, I basically raped you and I…” The stallion could see the tears falling from the griffin's eyes, an air of guilt hung over the room. Removing the inhibitor ring with a hoof, Dusk used his magic to wipe the tears from Blitz’s eyes turning the griffin's head to look him in the eyes.
“Blitz you didn’t take advantage of me… and you sure didn’t rape me. We’ve got a safe word remember, if I really felt that violated I’d used it. You were amazing tonight Blitz, and even with you being dominant you still put my safety and pleasure above your own. That shows how much you really care about me, so it’s okay. Besides I wouldn’t want you to be sad like this when you dom again.” Leaning up Dusk gave Rainbow a small lick on the cheek, the griffin's cheek glowed crimson as the tongue made contact. “I love you Blitz, and I promise nothing will ever change that.”
“I-I love you too Dusk.” Tears still flowed from his eyes but for a different reason, the two pulled each other into a tight embrace pulling away and looking into each other's eyes the two shared a deep passionate kiss. It took a few tries to get right, but finally, the two connected for several seconds before pulling away completely.
“I still have one question Blitz… how did you turn yourself into a griffin in the first place?”
“Oh, that was easy I snagged the book you used to turn us into Breezies, and had Elusive turn me into a griffin.”
“Blitz! You do realize the book I used to turn us into Breezies was destroyed when Tirek attacked right?! There are only a couple other transformation spells in the castle, which one did you pick?!”
“I-I don’t know it’s in my saddlebags over there.” Blitz pointed to his bags in the corner of the room. Dusk grabbed them with his magic and brought them over. He opened them whilst also turning on the light. He pulled out the book Blitz had used. He examined it and then gasped.
“Blitz! You do realize this is a species swapping spell book correct?!”
“I kinda figured as much…”
“Blitz no! I mean this book is used to permanently turn you into another species.”
“Wait what?! I didn’t… Oops!”
“Oops?! You turn yourself into a griffin forever, and all you can say is oops?!”
“Hey calm down Dusk. It’ll be okay, I can stay as a griffin while you work on a counterspell for this.”
Dusk sighed and looked at Blitz, “I’m sorry Blitz, I guess I’m just a little-stressed knowing I’m now going to have to spend a long time trying to fix you. I don’t even know if I can!” Dusk half screamed as he already played the situation over and over in his head as he tried to come up with a solution.
“It’s cool Dusk, I’m cool with staying like this for awhile. It’s actually totally awesome. Besides, I know you’ll do your best to turn me back to normal...and even if you can’t...would you still love me like this?”
“Of course I will always love you, Blitz, you’ve just gotta start thinking ahead more.” Dusk smiled and cuddled up against the soft griffin. The two lovers shared a final embrace before drifting off to sleep. Even though they will now have to overcome many obstacles because of Blitz mistakes, they both know they will get through it together.