Equestria Girls : Heartbroken

by sapphirebluez

First published

This story is about love, fear and of course friendsip. Join Twilight and her friends(Especially the new ones) as the overcome waves of challenges both physically and mentally.

Princess Twilight Sparkle and Flash Sentry want to try and fix their relationship with each other. Meanwhile Twilight must also help the Dazzling's seek redemption. This takes plave after Rainbow Rocks.
This is my first story so please, if any critic or helpful comments. I will be very pleased.

A tough time and a new idea.

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In Equestria it was a beautiful and magical night, but something was wrong in a certain crystal tree castle in the middle of Ponyville …….

Princess Twilight sighed in sadness as she tossed and turned around in her bedroom. She couldn’t sleep, something was bugging her, bothering her and hurting her. She got out of her comfy and warm bed and trotted to the kitchen to get a cup of cool and refreshing water. As she sipped the water she recalled her past events in the human world…….

She could hear it all….the insults, the hurtful words and the shouts of anger and protest from those angry students . On the outside she tried to hold it all, remain strong and determined, but on the inside she was hurt, scared, broken and most of all miserable.

Twilight thought that maybe she could hold it all and stay strong, but when she bumped into a person in which she loved and cared a lot she didn’t expect those cruel words from him. Those words hacked into her very soul and ripped her apart and when she just when she thought it was going to get worse, luckily Applejack interfered but even so he still had to continue saying more hurtful words and adding salt to the wound.

Granted, she knew he was under the spell of those three spiteful girls the Dazzlings but what she didn’t know that why was he so aggressive towards her especially when he was so happy to see her earlier during the day…..

The water in which Twilight was sipping in her cup was empty and she decided that maybe some fresh air from the balcony of her crystal castle would do a good thing or two. She trotted to the higher chamber of her castle and open the doors to her balcony. She breathed in the cool and refreshing night air which cleared her mind and she felt relaxed. After a few minutes of fresh air an idea popped up into her mind “I got it!!!” Twilight said excitedly before exiting the balcony and into her library.
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Within a certain crystal castle library, Princess Twilight Sparkle was busy fixing up the machinery which would get her to the human world and to see her love again. She then got out a certain special magical book using her magical aura to hold it. This certain book has special magic in which she uses to communicate with her new found friend Sunset Shimmer.

“T-Twilight?!!” a small child like voice said. Twilight jumped so hard she lost concentration on the book in which her magical aura was holding and the book dropped on the floor. She then turned around to see who’s voice was that and it turned out to be a certain small purple dragon with green spikes in which was her best friend, brother and Number one assistant Spike.

“S-Spike?!! What are you doing here?!!” Twilight exclaimed, shocked.

“I was asleep when I hear noises down the hallway and I woke up and went to investigate. I thought maybe a burglar or something had came in and I got worried, but when I saw you in the library levitating that magical book I got curious and wanted to ask, ‘What in celestia’s great name were you doing??” Spike explained.

“Well then Spike please don’t ever sneak up quietly on me again. That scared the Tartarus outta me.” Twilight laughed. “Also to answer your question, I have decided to go back to the human world to my certain ‘friends’ a visit” Twilight explained to the curious little dragon.

“Oh, and whom are those friends in which you are going to pay a visit in the middle of the night?” Spike asked curiously.

“Well…..just say a very special someone in I have a crush on.” Twilight hinted while blushing a little.

“ Oh so you DO like him eh?” Spike exclaimed cheekily while grinning form ear to ear.

“Yes, I do like him.” Twilight said. “BUT you must promise not to tell any of my friends this or they will be drooling all over me like a pack of hungry Timberwolves” Twilight told Spike seriously. “So, can I trust you to keep his as a little secret between you and me? Twilight asked.

“You bet!!” Spike said before moving his claws into a salute. “You can always trust your number one assistant to keep this a secret” he said will trying to imitate a voice of a well trained guard.

“Good” Twilight said happily. “Now back to business” she said while setting up the devices on the portal.

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While setting up the portal, the library was quiet, too quiet in fact to the point where it became a little awkward. But then the awkwardness was broken as Twilight’s voice interrupted.

“Besides seeing the boy in which I have a crush on, I have also thought of visiting three ‘very special humans’ ” Twilight said. “We-ll I won’t call them humans more like sirens.” Twilight informed.

“Oh, them too?: Spike said surprised by this. He never thought that Twilight would want to help them seek redemtion as well.

“Yes, those three as well” Twilight addressed to him. “If Sunset Shimmer can learn the Magic of Friendship then so can they.” Twilight said determined.

Now Spike understood this Twilight was really living up to her name as ‘Princess of Friendship” and that pleased him to see his big sister/best friend so determined to help what she calls now as former enemies. Sure, they had been a problem to Twilight and the gang but Twilight really wanted them to see the light and truly understand the Magic of Friendship.

“So Twilight, do you need some help?” Spike offered.

“Why I do Spike” she said. “Here, take these and set them up on top of the mirror” Twilight told Spike while handing him parts to help prepare the re-opening of the portal.

“Will do Twilight” Spike said willingly and went to fix them up on top of the portal.

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Once they finished setting up the portal Twilight and Spike began to discuss on what they should do first. Twilight insisted that she and Spike should meet up with her crush before helping the three sirens, while Spike explained that helping the three sirens would be better because leaving them in darkness wasn’t right for they were probably miserable and suffering and they shouldn’t keep those in darkness and misery for too long. But in the end, Spike’s explanation was more to point and he said it was Twilight’s responsibility as the Princess of Friendship to help those in need to learn the Magic of Friendship.

“I guess you’re right Spike I should help those in need of my aid first.” Twilight admitted.

“Since when am I ever wrong?” Spike joked which cause Twilight to roll her eyes from that sarcastic remark.

“Well then, we best be going. But before that we should prepare to bring some things to the human world incase we may have an overnight there.” Twilight stated. She then got some paper and a quill and began listing all the possible items needed to bring to the other world. A sleeping bag, some packed hay sandwiches, bottled water and some spare clothes(which will probably change shape to a more human form since the clothes were meant for a pony).

“Spike these are the things we need” Twilight exclaimed as she tore the list in half. She then kept the first half while giving Spike the other. “Here” she said you get to go gather what's on your list and I’ll gather what’s on mine and with that, they both went around the castle to pack to their trip towards the human world.

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Once both Twilight and Spike were done packing, Twilight took out more paper and her quill and wrote a letter to her friends and Princess Celestia telling them that she had to run an urgent errand in the other world.

“There aaaaannnnnnddd done!!” Twilight stated that she was finish with writing all the letters meant for her friends and fellow princess and mentor. “Spike!, please send these letters to them” Twilight ordered levitating a bunch of letters using a her magical aura.

“Will do Twilight” Spike addressed to her as he blew his magical green flames on them and they disappeared, on their way to deliverance.

“Thank you Spike” Twilight told him sweetly. Now, just one final letter as she a certain magical book up, got her quill and began writing…..

Dear Sunset Shimmer,

Just to inform you, I am heading on a trip to your world, no reason, just thought I visit because its been about…what? Three months since I seen you and the gang, so I am gonna drop by and say hi. So I will chat with you and the gang when we meet up tomorrow at daybreak. How’s that sound?. Anyway Spike and I will see you guys soon.

Your friend,

Princess Twilight Sparkle

Once Twilight had finished writing in the book, she closed it and put it on the top of the mirror to power it up. It was daybreak now and she and Spike prepared to go through the portal.

“Ready Spike?” Twilight asked concerned?

“Hey! I was born ready!!” Spike said confidently.

Twilight chuckled at Spike’s enthusiasm before taking a deep breath and said nervously “Well, here goes nothing” and with that, she jumped through the portal with her dragon companion Spike jumping in after her…….

Receiving, Preparing and Visitings

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Sunset Shimmer, Pinkie Pie, Rarity, Applejack and Rainbow Dash walked down the halls of Canterlot High School. As they walked down the hallway, they were greeted with many “Hi’s” and “Hello’s” for things had settled down since the Battle of the Bands and the Anon-A-Miss fiasco had been settled. The Mane 5 had apologized to Sunset Shimmer for treating her coldly and horribly for something she had never done and the students has apologized to the Mane 5 and Sunset Shimmer for their rude and rather immature habit when they were under the spell of the Dazzlings.

As they all approached their individual lockers, Sunset in particular had her old special enchanted book which was given to her by her former mentor Princess Celestia was glowing and vibrating in a magical way indicating that there was a message from her otherworldly friend Twilight. To which Sunset began to read the message from her pony friend.

Dear Sunset Shimmer,

Just to inform you, I am heading on a trip to your world, no reason, just thought I visit because its been about…what? Three months since I seen you and the gang, so I am gonna drop by and say hi. So I will chat with you and the gang when we meet up tomorrow at daybreak. How’s that sound?. Anyway Spike and I will see you guys soon.

Your friend,

Princess Twilight Sparkle

This of course excited Sunset very much and she went on to tell her human friends the wonderful news she received and got a rather good amount of response from them.

“Well darling isn’t that just pleasing!”

“OOOH!! I can throw her a ‘Welcome-back-to-the-human-world-again-for-the-third-time’party HEHEHE!!”

“Well I’ll be, sugarcube is that just darn tooting pleasing”

“Yay”

“This is soooooooooooo gonna be 20 percent cooler!”

Sunset smiled at their response and just as the school rang which ushered them back to class, but they couldn’t focus on what the teacher was saying as they counted down the hours to their friend, Twilight’s visiting.
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It was evening and school had just finished. Many students had left except for a certain group of friends who stood by the portals entrance of a certain horse statue and waited anxiously and excitedly for Twilight’s arrival.

“OOOOOOH!! I hope she arrives soon I am so excited that feel like I am gonna explode into a thousand puffy marshmallows!” Pinkie squealed as she was jumping up and down like a oversized pogostick.

“Bet ya 5 bucks she’s gonna be late.” Rainbow stated.

“ You’re on sugarcube!.” Applejack agreed.

Almost immediately the glass mirror below the statue began to ripple and the Mane 5 plus Sunset Shimmer gathered near the entrance and was suddenly tackled by a flying purple figure and a small puppy dog.

“TWILIGHT!!!” everyone shouted happily as the began to crush her in a gigantic group hug, for it had been such a long time since they actually got a chance to hangout with each other without any enemies in their way.

“It…good…to…see…you…girls…..too!” Twilight wheezed. “Um…could you…give me…a little space? I’m…kinda crushed here….”

As quickly as the hug started, it ended and Twilight took a large gasp of air.

“S-sorry Twilight i-its just that we were so excited to see you.” Fluttershy answered and she hid shyly behind her large wavy hair.

“That’s alright girls, I am too, very happy to see all of you. Including you, Sunset Shimmer.” Twilight said in a rather pleased tone.
“Look this is getting sappy and since you’re here I think we should have a sleep-” Dash stated before she was cut of by Pinkie.

“SLEEPOVER!!, My place again!!” Pinkie cried before dragging them down to her home in Sugarcube Corner.

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It was now a dark starry night with barely any audible noise except for the chirping of crickets and unusual dog barking at the distance. But down at Sugarcube Corner seven girls were talking, laughing and jumping around with massive, fluffy pillows in their hands.

“I’ll admit….being a princess has kept me on work for so long that I just had forgotten what the joy of pillow fighting with your friends can be!” Twilight giggled and she ducked from Fluttershy’s swinging pillow. Spike, however was chewing on a small rag doll that looked partially close to a changling.

“Hehe you’re right Twilight darling. Me being a lady I don’t usually play this little childish little gam- !” before Rarity could finish her sentence she was struck on the back by a playful Pinkie. “OH IT IS ON!!!!”

Rainbow Dash and Applejack however were not pillow fighting but instead arm wrestling and it seems that both of them weren’t giving up anytime soon. After about several minutes, Applejack finally slammed Rainbow’s hand down onto the table

“I win, YEEEEEHAW !” Applejack cried tossing her hat into the air while Rainbow grumbled in defeat.

ALRIGHT GIRLS IT’S TIME FOR BED!!!

The girls then made ‘AWWS’ as they heard Mrs. Cake voice shout across the hallway telling them that it was time for bed. They then begun to prepare for bed as they brought out their sleeping bags and some mattresses and say their goodnights. Twilight slept on the floor with Spike, as a puppy slept comfortably on her tummy.

Just before the room could shift into a quiet and soundless atmosphere, a voice broke out.

“Applejack?” Rainbow asked.

“Yes, sugarcube?” Applejack answered

“Does this mean I loss the bet?”

“Yes, sugarcube.”