• Member Since 1st Apr, 2023
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Troyjan


I am just a casual story writer and story reader.

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Rarity gets captured by a gang of old enemies. Spike is of the first to discover that Rarity has gone missing, and has little time to save her from her captors. Due to the urgency of the matter, Spike quickly sets out on his quest to save Lady Rarity on his own, despite Twilight's plan at act as a group. Throughout his rough journey, Spike faces several struggles and humiliating failures.

This story is my take on the scenario established within the long discontinued story titled "Rescuing Rarity", written by the user "Crosis", linked below.

https://www.fimfiction.net/story/149230/rescuing-rarity

This story's cover art was illustrated by me (I am not an artist).

Chapters (14)
Comments ( 2 )

I read it, it feels very descriptive when Rarity is stalked, but that's okay. Even so, maybe some more mystery adjectives would make it more entertaining.

As for the story, I'm surprised Rarity isn't taking a shower after a picnic with Pinkie Pie. I guess she was too busy to put up with her sweat XD

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