Hey! You've probably heard my story a thousand times right? Guy goes to a Convention, buys something, ends up in Equestria, then gets turned to stone because ponies think he's a threat. HOWEVER! I'm different, because I'm right! Celestia really is an evil dictator and I'm the only one who can or will (or want) to stop her. I am Orochimaru, and I shall defeat Celestia!
Get that sun bitch!
I always like these displaced stories. So many directions and so many questions.
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You’re here, too.
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You're also here as well.
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Nice
Don’t dragons have armor or something like that?
Is that what they use in mlp?
Doesn’t luna have her own military?
As in boruto mitsuki?
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Manda has really sharp fangs and went for the chinks in his scales.
I don't know, that is just how most people describe MLP magic energy and I needed something to link Chakra to.
From what I've seen, Luna only has the Night guard, as her and Celestia went to war together.
More or less. I haven't seen the Boruto series, and he played a minor role in this story.
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Oh ok
Will this continue?
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Yes. I'm just going through a dry spell with this.
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Ok
Curious on what plans you have for Spike for the other ones
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I can see why you're struggling considering the timeskips, switching between past and present, and the flashbacks. We know nothing of how Luna and Celestia met the main charterer, how did MC or Luna fell in love with each other? What life was those years ago, how did he arrived in Equestria? what did he do next afterwards? What the MC went through in terms of struggles to cope with the sudden shift in their life? What MC did after meeting starswirl the bearded? What the MC did during their time at said canterlot, how'd they learned to use their powers and the struggles of mastering them, how tough life living in this new world. Does he miss his old world? What was his life before then? How'd he make clone? where'd he learn it? Does he miss living a normal life?
There's quite alot you could show in terms of character growth and story progression.