A Tactical Retreat · 3:16pm May 9th, 2015
I wrote a new first chapter for my story. Since I just finished it, I have published it with the story in hopes it will fare better with the moderator who get the task to read through it.
Only this time, it is clearly Ponies of Equestria establishing the adventure. I used a few hints from the episodes of the latest season to help the story along. Just hope this goes down well.
As they say; the Ballon is going up!