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Mockingbirb


A pony of mystery in the darkness. Or I forgot to take the lens cap off. (They/them is fine.)

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Who or what has changed more: Anon's old home world, or Anon himself?


This story might or might not be an entry in Science Fiction Writing Contest (Mk III).

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 5 )

It was pretty good! Really liked the last couple sentences.

Holy shit, okay. This is something special

At least you were a good Anon, Anon. :applecry:

Enjoyable! :twilightsmile:

"too much lulz 🍄⛈️💀🪦🪦" says the caption.

Lulz. Sanjaya Malakar for prez. Or 🍊.

Hey there, fellow contestant! It's your friendly neighborhood Hat Man, and here's a quick review for you!

Okay... I hate Anon stories.

And I despise 2nd person.

You've done the improbable and made a story that contains both and does it in a way that I actually quite like. You took this incredibly stupid concept and made the nuclear fallout survivor both green and a literal everyman in a way that doesn't feel oblivious to why the trope should always be taken as a joke.

Take your Like and get the hell out of my sight. (But seriously, nice work! :pinkiesmile:)

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