A slice of life-ish story, and no I really don't have a interesting title, neither the description.
Made for the Entry of Dialogue only contest (the announcement), and Dialogue only contest (the group) (recommend reading the announcement first)
This was made in Google Docs, it just give me the excuse to write short Twinpie (i thought it was Twipie) story.
Rated teen for mild sexual content.
Are you going to add this to the contest group?
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Yes. (Edits: Also good luck on the contest)
Not "the" Sugarcube Corner, just "I have to go to Sugarcube Corner"
Does he not know her? Spike’s referring to her as if she’s a stranger.
"Ruby-filled", and can Twilight even eat those?
What happened? The scene changed from what was presumably Golden Oaks to Sugarcube Corner so suddenly, you could have added an hr line or divider.
That definitely did not mean "give me bits".
"Consult" isn’t a very Pinkie word.
Last I checked this wasn’t a genderbender fic, so "*her* dragon brother/son/whatever."
And everything after this point I have absolutely no clue what’s happening. The title doesn’t lie; not because it’s Slice of Life but because I have no clue what was happening towards the end.
Adorable cover art though
"TwinPie" with an "n" is a name for this ship I haven’t heard.
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Thank you for taking the time to read, and write a critique about my work. I will keep this in mind.