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Ok, this went harder than it had Any right to be, God damn.
Can't wait to see more.
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Thank you dude!
We need more of this story now
Is nice. But I feel like I got lost somewhere along the way and have only a slight clue what is happening.
To be honest, the whole battle thing was pretty confusing, but the dialogues that followed between Luna, Tia and Sombra were quite disturbing, I really hope to see more to read how this ends
For me, it was neat......right up till the whole fight bit....then I lost the plot in the confusion.
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Yeah, tbh I'm not really good at describing fight scenes. I'm trying to get better though!
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Hopefully I can get better at making fight scenes so I can actually bring my cool ideas and not make them confusing as all hell, thanks for the feedback!
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It’s not the fight scene itself, usually if I can understand a fight scene, but the lyrics to the song are quite distracting
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I could see why the music would be distracting. I was trying to go for the most accurate parallel to the actual fight scenes in Smile HD with different attack but I think I just overdid it.
Thanks for the feedback though!
...what in oblivion did I just read.
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Something very cringe my friend, something from the deep recesses of my mind, something I should really get a physiatrist to look into.
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Despite the detailed analysis of the data presented, I have failed to reach any meaningful outcome from the process due to a cascading dissonance of cognitive process.
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I did not understand a single word of that but I'll take it as a compliment.