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CrazedLaughter


I write weird stuff.

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(set in the Dadonequus series)

With Discord's ego on the line, he drags Anon along into the 'EQG' dimension to achieve his goals. However, said goals involve interviewing the Dazzlings, who are less than thrilled about the idea. Will Anon and Discord be able to gain their trust to obtain that interview? Who cares? We know that's not why you read these things by now.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 15 )

Heyo, good to see you throwin up some pony words again my friend, how've you been?

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watching my health, gaming, working, trying to get back somewhat into my groove.

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I feel that vibe, good to hear. Good luck groovin' my friend

Aria being the berserk of the group feels like a fitting role for her. She was always bitching and flaming, but no fire. I can only imagine that bat being pretty well worn at this point.

Do you realize who this is?! This is Discord! He’s a huge jerk, that’s all he is. You should know what he wants. It’s what he always does. Tricks bands into playing so he can call them terrible on his April Fools albums. Or bring them down in his stupid rags.

Could we not be this expository next time? I'd rather Discordant Records Discord be left vague.

Speaking of him, I wonder if that DRD is who he claims to be - if he is going to appear at some point and put our Discord on a leash. Or he might be just a mention, it's fun to speculate.

Anyway, the ruse is up and Anon is about to add some chaos to this taco. You always write the chaotic parts in a captivating way and I cannot wait to see how poorly this spell of Anon's goes.

I could easily imagine the sirens going for the deal where they get this Equestria. Anon would inadvertedly end up on the opposing side and yada yada, you know the rest.

Or, a second thought, he might have had to join the Dazzlings. Twilight would try to reform them in stead of banishingthem to the human world - because she is not a B like some Star Swirl. This would unstabilize some bullshit balance or something and force Anon to fight against the ponies. What do you think?

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its an interesting concept, but are you saying Anon's spell would lock them to their side? interesting if yes

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I'm saying that the spell would do exactly what it was supposed to: get the Sirens to Equestria at full power, but at this point it isn't guarded by the pillars, now it is Twilight's turn. She'd easily defeat them and try to corrupt them with friendship. This, however, would unstablize some bullshit parallel universe thing and Anon would have to join forces with the Sirens- create big enough of a threat -in order for Twilight to banish them back to where they are supposed be in the EqG world.

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Interesting idea, in actuality, that would turn out to be a pretty hilarious adventure. But the writing required for that would require some clever thinking to make it work

You had me there, I thought Discord was genuinely weepeng over the Dazzlings' poor fates, that it was his plan all along to make them happy.

His plan would go something along these lines, he'd get the interview, acting like his usual self, pissing them off in the meantime and having a good laugh. Then he'd grant them something not materially valuable, but sentimental - he'd get what that thing is through the interview. They'd all have a good, heartfelt cry, eat a Christmas meal and leave. This way he'd get bragging rights against Twilight and a story to make Fluttershy proud (maybe even get a victory smooch from her) .

No, it was all for a pun :pinkiecrazy:

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When it comes to writing for Discord, I always strive to make sure he's as show accurate as possible and always a fun read whenever he's part of the story. Balancing his usual antics and internal conflicts with story relativity and interaction. So I thank you for the comment.

She bit it! She bit your nose!
(...)
Well, that was kind of on the nose.

PFFT!

Now for potential errors:

Didn’t help you were about the size of a seven year old.

seven-year-old

(...) and a well groomed set of hair and goatee.

well-groomed (?)

Sure, in backwards as fuck logic, (...)

backwards-as-fuck (?)

“I believe that is their names, yes.”

"I believe those are (...)"

This purple mystery machine looking van with some vomit green paint?

mystery machine-looking (?)
vomit-green (?)

(...) if they hate you!” You yelled back at him.

Uppercase ‘y’ should be lowercase. (?)

In an instant, a familiar blue haired girl, with her hair down and in baby blue jammies, (...)

blue-haired
baby-blue (?)

Can I have a mome-g-g-g-g” You were now (...)

Missing comma or period. (?)

I’m the renowned reporter, Mr.D!

Missing space.

I am sorry for making you wait.

I guess that the taco was a canon event.

Now for potential errors:

“Do I have to say it?” You said

Uppercase ‘y’ should be lowercase. (?)

then slapped his own face as he muttered “I regret this decision.”

Missing comma before the dialogue. (?)

“I’m Mr.D,

he probably thought that whole ‘Mr.D’ shtick would have (...)

Missing space. (?)

I suppose you know I’m from Equestria then?

So, what happened to your version of us then?

Missing comma before ‘then’. (?)

“No…” He growled lowly.

Uppercase ‘h’ should be lowercase. (?)

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