Inspired by Letters From A Disgruntled Friendship Student by Milesprower06.
Letters From A Disgruntled Multiverse is basically the same thing but also crosses over with many other fimfiction stories by the Fimfiction Community.
This is not going to end well....
Special thanks to my old editor Pastelights for editing the first few chapters.
Special thanks to my new editor Neko Majin C for editing this
Nyx is from Past Sins by Pen Stroke
Disclaimer:
The following is a work of parody, and is protected as Fair Use under section 17 U.S. Code § 107 of US Copyright Law. My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic and all affiliated characters are property of Hasbro Inc
A promising start. I'm actually a huge fan of letters, so if you buck this up I'm coming for you, and I'm bringing sexually frustrated twislut with me. (Which may or may not be a good thing. Depending on how much you like bondage.)
looking forward to more chapters. Your (cautiously) optimistic friend, thedarkitty.
6610255 Thanks for your
threatscompliment.Not gonna lie, I expected this to be one of those really bad spin-offs with bad grammar (especially since it has Past Sins in it) but color me impressed, no grammar mistakes I can find and you made me wake up my roommate with my laugh at that last part. Keep it up.
6610418 I personally liked the story Past Sins so that's why I wanted to do my absolute best in my letter. Quality deserves Quality after all. Appreciate any feedback given so I can improve
I'm sure some of it was lost on me because I haven't read Past Sins, but consider this tracked!
That last part though
I haven't actually read Past Sins as of now, however this was still very enjoyable. My main reaction was saying "wut" out loud, but in a good way
How do we nominate a story for the Letters treatment?
6613553 Sorry I'm not clear on what you're asking.
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Well how does a particular story get the satirical Letters treatment? How did Past Sins get selected for being joked about as the kick off to this multiverse idea?
6613585 It was my favorite story and the one I had the most jokes to use about it out of all other stories I've read thus far.
6613585 If possible after I finish with Past Sins I may write a blog post asking what story you want me to satire next. Either a One-Shot or Full Blown Story.
Though I have at least 4 stories in mind I want to satire as well.
Whichever comes first
Cute. Looking forward to more.
I've never read Past Sins. Nor do I particularly plan on doing so. That said, there's no way in hell I'm letting that stop me from favoriting and tracking this!
6614662 I have read it, and let me tell you, you actually aren't missing very much.
Ooh, this is gonna be good!
Sorry my dear readers for the long wait but my editor is still busy with school and she won't be free until Thanksgiving. So I posted this chapter unedited.
So do you readers want me to post my unedited chapters which I've done till chapter 4 or wait it out until Thanksgiving to post them?
Coment your thoughts here.
Oh god the implications...
(Also, I don't mind waiting.)
6615646 To be honest, that story could've been executed a little better...
As for this story: I absolutely loved it! This is what I imagine what went on between everyone in the first place when everything happened. You sir, have earned a thumbs up and a follow from me. Good jorb.
6638449 yes i want you to post your unedited chapters which you have done till chapter 4
Hello!~
If you don't know who I am, I'm the editor for this story!
I just wanted to thank you all for being so patient for the chapters to be edited! It means a lot to me.
Edited chapters will be out by tomorrow night or Tuesday! (No later than Tuesday).
Stay tuned! :)
-Pastel
Dear Miss Rainbow:
Miss Twilight wantedI wanted to ask you if you needed to borrow my glasses. I'm sure they could come in handy.Shyly and innocently,
Nyx
Starting with Past Sins was smart in my book, because it immediately makes this story my favorite.
6638449 Post them
Pfft.
Now would that REALLY be so bad?
What's this? Disgruntled Twilight is growing a HEART?! What is this madness?
I'd say that this was one of the best moments ever.
6714967 ?
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Pfft [pfft]
exclamation, no plural
A sound meant to convey amusement. It is achieved by letting a puff of air out of your mouth, creating the distinct sound. The length can vary between levels of amusement.
*snerk*
And YOU are a sociopathic nymphomaniacal bitch.
Classy.
So, she's the Grinch, but less fun.
6715022 Funny Fact about Past Sins. There was complaints by some readers of Nyx derailing the character of Twilight in the story. Personally, I disagree with them as I found it made sense since Twilight grew as a character by caring for Nyx like an adopted daughter. In my story I'm parodying that compliant into a fact that it does happen with Disgruntled Twilight.
6718557 I like the idea of Disgruntled Twilight being changed by Nyx
The 'Ask Twixie' reference was the best in my opinion...just to picture Disgruntled Twilight's reaction to that world's timeline.
Method Mares, eh?
Nice.
"Smile Hd" was mentioned here
Nyx learned to have slaves... Friendship is Slavery after all
Sorry for the long wait everyone. Having a part-time job can really mess with your schedule.
Anyways hope you enjoy this chapter.
Appreciate any comment on what made you laugh about this or any chapter in this story. Also, tell your friends who are fans of Letters From A Disgruntled Friendship Student to have a read of this as well.
Merry Almost Christmas everyone and have a Happy Hearthswarming Eve,
MixMassBasher
I see what you did that. Also, PyChe-Locks.
Daaw!
i like it and i would answer the question in the Author's Note since i have the past sins book but i don't want to spoiler it for everyone that read this story
6756699 Thanks
The pony's a Spy!
Happy 2016 my dear followers. Hope you like this chapter and appreciate every rate, comment and follow.
I'll be taking a one week break from this story since I'll be going on a vacation with my dear family.
See you soon.
-MixMassBasher
6788153 Whoops didn't see those errors...
Thanks Shadow
I'm BACKKKKKKK!!!!!
Anyways I'm back from the vacation with my family so here's Chapter 9. Enjoy and I appreciate any comment, like and follow considering last i've checked there are 60 users tracking this story yet only a small percentage are ever commenting....
See you in the next chapter.
-MixMassBasher
Ah Friendship is Witchcraft, that and the Mentally Advanced Series were how I got into ponies. That and Discord, so I went online, marathoned Season 1 and then got to the Discord two parter. Ah memories, sorry about that just, reliving old times.
I want there to be a fight between Celestia and Twilight.
6819083 Actually I'll be more focus on the conflict between mother and daughter during that scene.
6819088 i wanted Twilight to actually fight Celestia for Nyx. Celestia uses a Stun Spell
What if there were no cares given that Nightmare Moon was back.
Surely the Everfree Forest has done more.
Imma do it.
I understood that reference.
I want that.
I want this.
Brotherhooves Social.
Actually, from what I heard, she was offered the job, but she said no, because due to the contract, it'd mean she wouldn't be able to work on fan projects.
I want this. I personally don't mind Flash, he's a little bland, but he's OK in my book.