Time is a fickle thing isn’t it? One simple change and the universe could go into disarray. Yes, not all changes are bad, but most universes depend on six special ponies. Without them, that worlds Equestria could go into chaos, but not every. But lets think for a moment, one simple, tiny change can create a world so different, but all so similar.
Who ever knew that one rainboom would’ve connected twelve different ponies from different parts of Equestria? When Twilight Sparkle and Sunny Starscout go to Maretime Bay to check on preparations, a series of unfortunate events leads them to become Equestria’s new guardians.
Chapters (2)
Hello there. Thanks greatly for getting this story started. Appreciate the work going into the dialogue, characterizations and future chapter set-up. Really liked Sunny's dream world chat with Clover (as well as Fate chewing Clover out for interfering, even if it was in a dream) as well as the interactions with Twilight Velvet, the dream world chat with Celestia and the AU characterization notes (yeah, it makes sense that Twilight would be less introverted than canon at this point from spending time with Sunny).
I will definitely be looking forward to more of this.
I love it, I hope you make more of the story my friend
Nice!
I am REALLY liking this so far, and am excited to see how it continues!
I thought this story that make twlight&sunny sidterd
I'm glad somebody else is making another "12 Elements" story! Very unfortunate that the only other one before this got cancelled.
Keeping an eye on this one for sure!
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Thanks immensely for getting the next chapter up. I really like the work going into the dialogue, characterizations and future chapter set-up. Really liked the descriptions of the bits of subtle influence Twilight and Sunny have had on each other. And, yeah, the little bits of foreshadowing concerning Sunny's reaction to the stuff mentioned concerning Nightmare Moon's previous defeat were also well done, as was Sunny mentioning having previously lived in Maretime Bay before she moved to Canterlot as a filly and even knowing about Sweet Apple Acres. I wonder if Hitch is going to be talking to Rainbow about finding a place to practice her stunt flying AFTER she takes care of the clouds (with Sunny reacting to her old friend being the current sheriff). Zipp showing signs of wanting to prepare for Nightmare Moon from HER OWN research would be a great touch foreshadowing her interest in detective work.
And, for some reason, I could easily see Opaline being the second major villain the Mane Twelve face - AFTER Nightmare Moon, but BEFORE Discord. As well as Opaline being their biggest RECURRING enemy, teaming up with most of the other major villains at least once each individually before the final season. But that's my imagination running away with me and I'm sorry about that.
But, anyway, definitely looking forward to more of this.
I love it, can't wait to see more of it
Cheer up with your fanfic... although... twelve characters? it's going to take time
HELL YEAH!!!!!!
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Me too!
One question, in this story Futtlershy and Posey Bloom are related as identical cousin type or are opposite twin sisters?
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Thanks for commenting! Opaline, fortunately, will NOT take place between Season 1 and Season 2, but between Season 2 and 3... well, you’re just gonna wait and see! In Season 1, Opaline will be in about 2 - 4 episodes, but during Season 2 is when she steps up her game. I can see why Zipp would want to prepare for Nightmare Moon, y’know, the whole detective business. But I’m still figuring out when and how I should put it so do NOT expect the new chapter soon.
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You're quite welcome. Of course, with Hitch being the sheriff and Zipp's detective deal, it would also make sense that they would both be in charge of security for the Celebration. Security would be a good one for AFTER weather but BEFORE decorations. Izzy, of course, would be helping Rarity with decorations and Pipp could be helping Fluttershy with music. Misty (an old friend of Izzy from when they both lived in Bridlewood) could be the one who was in charge of the library before Twilight and Sunny moved in [well, moved BACK in Sunny's case]).
A possible dialogue for Sunny and Hitch:
Sunny: Hi, Hitch. It's been a long time.
Hitch: Eleven years - just a few months before Twilight became Princess Celestia's personal student based on one of your letters. And, well, I'm sorry to hear about what happened to your dad last year. I know what that's like.
Sunny: Yeah. One of your letters mentioned you lost both of your parents a couple years after I moved to Canterlot with my dad. At least Granny Figg did a good job taking care of you. One of your most recent letters mentioned that you just made sheriff a few months ago.
Hitch: Yeah. I did. Anyway, I know you and Twilight are here to look over Summer Sun Celebration security and I hope it meets to Princess Celestia's high standards.