My Little Pony: Achievement Hunter: The Musical

by Fanfic27

First published 22nd of March, 2020

Ponies parodies the greatest musical of all time

On a normal day the Mane Six along with Starlight, the CMC, and Spike, unexpectedly get trap inside a magical book and the only way to escape is to remake greatest musical ever.

Contains: Characters making fun of one another, swearing, and other things

Bad grammar and even bad setup.

(All songs used here belong to Achievement Hunter.)

Prologue/What Are We Doing Twilight?

Author's Notes:

Yes, I rushed the intro, because I want to get to the main story already. Side note Apple Bloom, Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo are in eighth grade in my story so they are a little order than in the cartoon. If your wondering, yes they have their cutie marks.

So listen I suck at setting up a story so I decided to skip the boring part and get to the more fun and entertaining part of the story, so I apologize to anyone expecting a complicated and complex intro, deal with it.

I already have the outline for the rest of this story so no need to wait a while for the next chapter, as new chapters will be released weekly.

So hopefully this story does well so I can start prepping my ideas for another story that I want to do.

My idea for my other story if this does well. Remaking Rooster Teeth Animated Adventures, but with characters from MLP

It was a normal day in Ponyville, the sun was shinning bright, and the ponies who live there were going about their day, but for ten ponies and one dragon this complete normal day will turn into the greatest adventure that they've ever been on.

The Mane Six along with Starlight and the CMC were hanging out around the Crystal Map inside the Castle of Friendship, when all of a sudden a magical book appeared before them and sucked them into it.

Then they appeared in the a center of a forest that is opened up so you can see the sky, clouds, and the bright shinning sun.

"Is everypony ok."Twilight asked to her friends

"Yes." everpony else and dragon answered

"Um, Twilight where are we?" Rainbow Dash asked

"It appears we where sucked inside the book." Twilight said

"Well, why are we here?" Starlight asked as she looks at her surroundings.

"I can answer that." a male voice said

"Who said that." Starlight asked while looking around her surroundings, not seeing anyone around. "Did you girls hear that."

"Hear what?" Applejack asked Starlight

"That voice." Starlight said

"What voice?" Twilight asked her student

"We didn't hear anything darling." Rarity said as she went back to talking with her friends

"Great I'm hearing things now." Starlight said to herself

"Your not hearing things, I'm talking just to you directly right now." the male voice said once again

"I think I'm going crazy." Starlight said

"Your not going crazy, I'm the Narrator and if your wondering where I am, I'm everywhere, I have no physical form, but I can make one if I wanted too." the Narrator said

"Then way don't you?" Starlight asked

"Because I like being a disembody voice, it's more fun this way." the Narrator said

"Oh, then if you don't mind could you please make yourself know to my friends?" Starlight asked politely

"Sure, but to be honesty I think your cute when you have no idea what's going on." The Narrator said teasing her.

Starlight, blushing at the comment said "Thanks."

"But, yes I will make sure every one of your friends can hear me, give me a second." The Narrator said

It was quite for a few seconds before the Narrator said out loud so Starlight and her friends could hear him.

"Hello, everypony." the Narrator said to everyone around him.

"Oh my." Rarity said

"Starlight wasn't crazy after all." Rainbow dash said

"Thank You." Starlight said with a smile, then realized what Rainbow said "Hey!"

Hello everyone let me introduce my self I'm The Narrator and I oversee the creation of all books, from beginning to end.

"Wow your like a God?" Pinkie Pie said "Could you make me a book made out of cupcakes!" Pinkie Pie said with a wide smile on her face.

"Maybe later, but your probably all wondering way I trapped you inside this book. You see being trapped inside book for over two thousands years, gets a bit boring at times." The Narrator said

"TWO THOUSANDS!" Everypony plus Spike screamed

"Yes, I was friends with Princess Celestia's and Luna's parents when they were just little foals, before they grew up and married and eventually had the two princess sister you all know and love." The Narrator said

"Really!" Twilight said excitingly

"Really, but I won't be answering who they were or what happened to them, for that is a secret for you ponies to discover on your own, but anyway I thought by taking you inside one of my many magical; books it would provided me with some entertainment." The Narrator explained "So I need you to do something for me before I send you back to your world."

"Ok, what do we need to do to leave?" Twilight asked

"The only way your getting out is by performing a musical of my choosing." The Narrator said

"Oh which musical, The Count of Monte Crisco or how about Hamlet." Twilight said excitedly

The Narrator then said "None of those the musical."

"Oh." Twilight said "Which one?"

"The one that i have in mind combines all different types of music rock, hip hop, rap, country, metal, and others." The Narrator said

"What is it called?" Rarity asked generally curious about this musical that he was talking about.

"It's called Achievement Hunter: The Musical." The Narrator said with a happy tone to it's voice

"Huh?" Starlight asked

"Excuse me?" Rarity said almost live she was offended

"What in Equestria did he say?" Applejack said

"YAY!" said the CMC " Cutie Marks Crusaders Musicians!"

Then Apple Bloom realized something "Wait a minute girls, don't we already have our cutie marks?"

"Yeah, but that just makes this experience even better." Sweetie Belle said

"I agree." Scootaloo said agreeing with her friend

"Yay, Cutie Marks Musicians." They yelled

"What?" Twilight said confused "I've never heard of it, any of you girls heard of it."

Everyone else shook their heads.

"Well Twilight, I thought you should be aware that it's from your friend Sunset's Dimension." The Narrator said

"Oh, that's cool." Twilight said with a smile

"What so what your saying is the only what to escape from here is by remaking a musical that none of us knows or ever heard about. " Rarity said

"Yes that's right." the Narrator said

"But how are we going to do that?" Apple Bloom asked

"I'll explain it, if you want." the Narrator said "Either one or more of you will be performing the songs and you must give it your hundred percent or else you'll be trapped here forever."

Everyone either gulped nervously or had a smile on their face excited to do this.

"The musical begins now, do you want to start it Applejack?" the Narrator said

"What?" Applejack asked "Why me?"

"Because it makes sense according to what I have plan for you ponies..." the narrator said

"Excuse me?' Spike said

...and dragon." the narrator said correcting itself "Oh before you start I forgot to mention only some of you will be singing certain songs that I feel goes either with your personality or is the complete opposite, but let's leave that to be a surprise."

Applejack than sighed and said "Alright fine, let's start this thing."
------------------------------------------------------------------
(Music Starts)
"1, 2, 3, 1, 2, 3, 1, 2, 3, 1, 2, 3." Twilight sang

"1, 2, 3, 1, 2, 3 ,1, 2, 3." Everypony else sang
-----------------------------------------------------------------
Then they stopped and realized that they were singing.

"Wait, why did we just started singing?" Twilight asked

"Because I figure having you preform songs unexpectedly is more amusing than ones that are planned out." the Narrator said

"Oh great." Rainbow Dash said

"Now let's us start this shall we." the Narrator said with a little humor in his voice.

"Fine, but since we're doing this, what do we do now?" Starlight as her friends.

"Mmm, how about you ask Twilight, she smart I'm sure she knows what to do next." the Narrator suggested with a tone to his voice that almost sounds like he's smiling.

"Twilight?" Spike asked "What do we do now?"

"Well.." Twilight tried to talk, but then was interrupted.

"What are we doing Twilight?" Rainbow Dash asked

"I was just about to.." Twilight tried to talk again, but was interrupted once again

'Yeah, Twilight what are we going to do?" Fluttershy asked shyly

"Hey, Twilight what are we doing?" Pinkie Pie asked

Twilight, who just gave up at trying to explain anything, just sat there and sighed.

"Twilight, what are we going to do?" Starlight asked

"Twilight!" Scootaloo said

"Twilight!" Sweetie Belle said

"Twilight!" Apple Bloom said

"What are we doing?" Applejack asked

"Twilight." Rarity said "What are we doing?"
--------------------------------------------------------------
(Music Starts)

"Twilight! Twilight!, What are we doing Twilight?, Twilight! Twilight!, What are we doing Twilight?" Everypony sang

"Are we going to play some Hoofball?" Scootaloo sang

"Perhaps some board games?" Fluttershy sang

"Want me to start the Friendship Games?" Applejack sang

"Have you seen my new Wonderbolt name?" Rainbow Dash sang

"We have enough for the Equestrian Games!" Applebloom sang

"Let's go to the Foal and Filly Fair!" Sweetie Belle sang

"Maybe Nightmare Night, please?" Starlight sang

"Or another Crystal Faire." Apple Bloom sang

"How about Hearts and Hooves Day?" Spike sang

"Winter Wrap Up’s always fun!" Rarity sang

"Or Sisterhooves Social." Starlight sang

"What’s the last game did Rainbow win?" Fluttershy sang

"Hey!" Rainbow Dash yelled

"I’m feeling Hearth's Warming!" Sweetie Belle sang

"I need the Summer Sun!" Pinkie Pie sang

"Let’s do The Trader Exchange!" Rarity sang

"We’ve got Running with the Leaves!" Fluttershy sang

"Twilight, please just tell us, what we’re about to do!" Everypony sang

"Everypony, SHUT. THE. BUCK. UP!" Twilight yelled, then calmly said "We’re doing a musical."
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
"Ok, that's what were doing, we're doing a bucking musical." Twilight said aggressively to her friends.

"Gees, Twi calm down we were just asking." Rainbow Dash said.

"Yeah, were just having fun." Scootaloo said.

"Girls, you're starting to get on my nerves." Twilight said while rubbing her face with her hooves.

"You think your on each other nerves now, you have no idea what waits ahead for you." the Narrator said with a smile.

To Be Continued?

Next Chapter: Still in the Air.

Author's Comments 1

Yeah so this my comments about why things are the way are.

As a fan of both Achievement Hunter and MLP FIM, I was like why haven't there been stories about the two worlds combined or mix together, not just simply one meeting the other. Then it hit me why not have them sing the songs from the musical in a story that is both equally confusing and awesome, and that's what I am doing.

Just to be clear, I know I have a lot of stories that are either incomplete or new chapters are uploaded very slowly. So in order to fix that problem I have been writing all the chapters at the same time switching between one another. Now I can figure out which song goes where, who will be singing it, and the dialogue leading up to the song and afterwards as well.

Also by the time this story is finished I will have two bonus chapters that I can put out if people are interested.

Do not worry the next chapter will be uploaded some time tomorrow.

I've also begun work on another story, but I'm only working on written drafts of the story and I have not begun to type it out yet, as I am finishing this story first before starting another one.

But yeah expect a new chapter at least every Sunday or Monday depending on how much free time I have each day.

Thank You for all the support
Signed,
Fanfic27

Still in the Air/Get Beautiful

"Ok, since we all did the opening I think it's time for one pony to sing the next song." The Narrator said "But I'll leave that up to you."

"Alright, who wants to go next?" Twilight asked her friends

"Not me." Starlight said

"I don't want to." Applejack said

"I'll do it." Fluttershy said

Everyone looks at Fluttershy in shock.

"Are you sure darling?"asked Rarity

"Yep, I'm sure." Fluttershy said with a smile.

"Is everypony ok with that?" Twilight asked the rest of her friends

The rest of them agreed with the choice.

"Ok, everypony agreed that Fluttersy will be singing the next song." The Narrator said "But we will need two back up singers, any volunteers?

"I guess I'll be one." Rainbow volunteered.

"Ok that's one we still need one more." The narrator said "Anypony else?"

No one answered.

"Mmm, no one else wants to be a back up singer." The Narrator said "Alright then well let me fix that."

A portal suddenly appeared above them and a pony fell out of the portal and landed onto the ground in front of them. The pony was none other than The Great and Powerful Trixie herself

"Ah, what, where am I?" Trixie said confusingly

"Hi, welcome Trixie I brought you here to provide back up vocals for Fluttershy." The Narrator said with amusement in his voice

"Um, ok." Trixie said awkwardly

"Why is Trixie here?" Twilight asked The Narrator

"I only need her here to help back up Rainbow Dash, but once the song is over she'll be sent back to Ponyville, safe and sound." The Narrator said

As the conversation was going on about why Trixie was here, Fluttershy meanwhile was staring up into the big blue open sky and thought of all the times she had been scared of flying when she was a filly. Now that she has gotten over that fear, she loves flying, especially when she fly's high up above the clouds. As she looks at the sky something inside of her was calling to get out, as she realized this inner voice was dying to escape her mouth, she started to sing.
-----------------------------------------------------------
(Slow Music Starts)

"Since I was a filly, I dreamed of this day
Not sure of what or how I would say
I was clearly not destined for this dirty soil
I was meant to explode, like fire to oil
The birds in the sky, they have nothing on me
I was the one planning while they nest in their tree
One cliff, one jump, and soon I’d be there
Proudly exclaiming, "I’m still in the air!" Fluttershy sang

"I’m still in the air!" Fluttershy sang

"She still in the air!" Trixie and Rainbow sang

"I’m still in the air!" Fluttershy sang

"She’s still in the air!" Trixie and Rainbow sang

"While you scramble around on the earth down there, I, I’m still in the air." Fluttershy sang

"She’s still in the air!" Trixie and Rainbow sang

"I sail away now, upwards towards heaven
And look down upon you, you grounded seven
Perhaps I’ll just live here, up in the clouds
Instead of dealing with the unbathen crowds." Fluttershy sang

"I’m still in the air!" Fluttershy sang

"She’s still in the air!" Trixie and Rainbow sang

"I’m still in the air!" Fluttershy sang

"She’s still in the air!" Trixie and Rainbow sang

"I fly around while your hoof’s on the ground
And I, I’m still in the air" Fluttershy sang

"She’s still in the air!" Trixie and Rainbow sang

"I’m falling down now, that Discord’s a dick
And soon I’ll be dealing with all of you pricks
All this time spent flying with zero regrets
I swear to return, on that you can bet
Brace now for my hasty arrival
It strengthened me, this skyward revival
Once again I am grounded but I solemnly swear
That I’ll return soon, back to the air!" Fluttershy sang

"I’m still in the air!" Fluttershy sang

"She’s still in the air!" Trixie and Rainbow sang

"I’m still in the air!" Fluttershy sang

"She’s still in the air!" Trixie and Rainbow sang

"While you scramble around on the earth down there
I, I’m still in the air." Fluttershy sang as she finished her portion of the song.

"She’s still in the air!
She’s still in the air!
She’s still in the air!
She’s still in the air!
She’s still in the air!" Trixie and Rainbow Dash sang.
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
As the song ended everypony was impressed with Fluttershy and her vocal performance.

"Wow, Fluttershy, that was amazing, you did it better than the person who originally sang it." Pinkie said to Fluttershy.

"Who sang it originally?" Twilight asked Pinkie.

"Oh, just some mad king who likes to put cows in holes." Pinkie said calmly.

Everyone looked at her strangely, but ignored what she said.

"Wait, where did Trixie go?" Rainbow asked as she looked for her.

"Oh, I sent her back to Ponyville when no one was looking." The Narrator said.

As her friends began to talk among themselves, there was one pony who was in the middle of a crisis. Rarity was beginning to have a breakdown as she began to looks among her friends she realized that she looked more beautiful than some of her friends. She realized that they couldn't stay like that as she started to sing.
-----------------------------------------------
(Punk Music)

"Hoof and Hoof around the store
Give your tail a little smack
As I give you makeup
And some jewelry

Get beautiful, yeah!
Get beautiful, yeah!

Imma dress you up
I'll take your eye and make it sparkle
Put a scarf around your neck
With some fabrics I rule them all.

Get beautiful, yeah!
Get beautiful, yeah!
Get beautiful, yeah!
Get beautiful, yeah!
Get beautiful, yeah!
Get beautiful, yeah!

Looking at you as your passing me
As determined as you can be
With your fashion sense
You know what?
You look funky

Get beautiful, yeah
Get beautiful, yeah

Get beautiful motherbucker
You just got really beautiful
Put your ugly self in the trash
With your new look, you take off in a dash" Rarity sang as she fell onto the floor in a spasm.
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Wow Rarity that was.."

Weirdly good." Rainbow said

"Why thank you." Rarity said.

The ponies then start to discuss what's going to happen next. The Narrator on the other hoof is plotting something in his head

"Four down, six more to go." The Narrator said menacingly "Once this musical is over then we'll she if she is the one that the legends described."

The only question is:

Who is he talking about?

To Be Continued?

Author's Notes:

Next Week Chapter: Introducing Team AT and the DUSK MARES!

Author's Commentary:
Yeah I couldn't really come up with a good parody for I'm Still in the Air so I kept it and just changed a few words to keep it in the world of MLP.

But most of the week was spent working on parodying "Get Sprunked" and I thought since I have Rarity singing I just though "hey what if it was about her making other ponies beautiful and that idea stuck with me and what you read is what I came up with."

Author Note (Side Story)

So for the past few days I've been working on a another story that hopefully you will like I've already posted it.

It's not the same story I mentioned in my other Author Note, it's just a quick little side project that I'm only working on for the month of April and then it's going to end. It's called My Little Pony Misadventures, which are short stories about the main six and what happened to them between episodes. Each chapter has three of these stories told either from one character or three different ones. Also they are based on stories told from Rooster Teeth Animated Adventures. Here's a sample of one of those stories:

Mean Squirrels:
Three days after Griffon the Brush-off.

Pinkie Pie was helping Applejack with some stuff at the farm.

"Wow the apples are looking beautiful, you must get a lot of critters coming through here." Pinkie said

"Yeah, some good and some bad." Applejack said

"What are the bad ones?" Pinkie asked

"Well when I first moved onto the farm we had this problem when there was a squirrel, where every time it saw me it would throw stuff at me." Applejack said "If I would walk outside the squirrel was in a tree, he would fine branches or like nuts or whatever to throw it at me and he would hit me! Then he tried to piss on me once."

Pinkie snickers at this.

"I was like standing next to a tree ready to knock the apples off of the tree." Applejack said "And like all of a sudden like liquid started falling next to me and I was like "What's that?" and I look up and there's the squirrel like pissing down, like straight right next to me. I'm like "It's the bucking squirrel!"

"Your getting bullied." Pinkie said while laughing

"Yeah." Applejack said
----------------------------------------
Do not worry the next chapter of the musical will be posted on Sunday. So until then thanks for all the support so far.

Temporary Hiatus

Dear Readers,

I felt obligated have to share with all of you what's been going on for the past few hours since I've last posted, but recently my dad has gotten sick and I'm hoping it's not the corona virus, but we're not sure. Also because I've been home for the past month and a half, my mind has been in a really dark and depressing place as of late. I'm also starting to lose my creative vision for this story and for writing in general. Hopefully everything is fine and I can get my mind back to normal and I can find a a way to keep my love for writing going, but for now I'm unfortunately putting this story on a temporary hiatus.

Don't worry as I will try to stay active on this site, as I like to help support other writers by liking and commenting on their stories, but for now I will not be posting any updates for at least the next month or so. I am really grateful for all the support I've received on this story and if you like this story, please check out some of the other stories that I've written and hope to complete in the near future. Thanks you so much from the bottom of my heart.