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When Twilight is sent to Amethyst Harbor to prepare for the Summer Sun Celebration by Princess Celestia to meet up with her other student Sunset Shimmer, Twilight is less than happy that her warnings about Nightmare Moon are being ignored. When Nightmare Moon finally reveals herself, Twilight and Sunset find themselves being assisted by two stunt flyers of the Wonderbolts, an artist and a gardener pony.
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Still alive he/she lives praise the gods God or goddesss
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I am very much alive lol. Busy with irl: work, buying a new car etc
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Ah well I understand all too well
Laid off had new car to register and only 5Gs in the bank two of for taxes the rest disappeared quickly got a job about 3weeks later
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Yeah adult life is no bueno
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I want manual for how to adult please đ
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Fuck man me too
Twilight is a bit of a.......B
i like where this going hope to read more soon
Sometimes, we all need to hear things we dislike, because it helps us change and become better...
Seems like Sunset may become honesty in this universe...
Sunset's Spitfire's younger sister and isn't a vindictive b*tch? Sign me up, I look forward to what you will write.
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Mhm! It's my canon that they're related. Blaze is also her sister in this universe. Blaze and Spitfire really look alike. So does Sunset, with their manes and coat/skin color.
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Some people have Sunset and Spitfire dating too in certain universes which aren't bad stories.
Is it wrong that I would absolutely love to see a chapter dedicated to what exactly happened between Sunset and Silverspeed last night
Thanks very much for getting this story started. So far, this looks like a pretty good opening. Yeah, Twi might be a bit off-putting, but she was that way in canon at first too. Definitely hoping she will mature out of it. Also liked the work going into Sunset and Spike's characterizations thus far.
On to the next chapter.
Yeah, you're doing a wonderful job on this so far. Definitely liked the work going into describing things over in Amethyst Harbor as well as Sunset's relationships (both her sisters AND significant other). All in all, splendidly done work concerning characterizations, dialogue and future chapter set-up.
And, on to the next chapter.
Again, you did an excellent job on this chapter. REALLY loved the meeting with Wallflower and High Winds. As well as the banter at Sunset's house between her, Silverspeed, Spitfire and Blaze and the reflections on the Rich Family.
I am really looking forward to more of this.
I think you should delete the section I crossed out. It's information that just gets repeated in the next two paragraphs.