It was a somewhat nonplussed Sunset who watched Celestia’s car screech away. Shrugging, she turned to her objective: the modest yellow house where Fluttershy lived. It was small for a family of four, but came off as a cozy place of warmth and love. Sunset had only visited a few times, and on each occasion left with pockets full of homemade treats and cat hair all over her pants.
She ran a hand down her sleeve, idly trying to smooth the wrinkled leather. Luna’s hand-me-down jacket wasn’t as fashionable as Sunset’s old Hemline-brand, but it was a lot more practical. Stained flannel lined the inside, giving warmth at the cost of a bulkier look. It could also zip up all the way to her neck, and had extra pockets on the inside big enough for a handgun.
Sunset was a teenager; of course she wished for her trendy, slimming Hemline back. But this was fashionably-damaged black leather, and it would do well enough for now.
Her knock on the door brought a “Meep!” from the inside. Maybe Fluttershy, but also maybe her mom or dad. The apple didn’t fall far from the tree with that one.
The door opened an inch, and a yellow face peeked out. “Um… hi Sunset.”
“Hi Flutters.” Sunset gave a little wave. “Thanks for seeing me.”
The door opened the rest of the way, revealing a pajama-clad Fluttershy. She beckoned shyly and stepped back from the door, eyes on the ground.
Sunset followed. “We have like fifteen minutes. You need to get ready for school.”
“I told them I was sick.” A soft clicking began as Fluttershy tapped her nails together. “I know it’s wrong, but I’m just so scared.”
“Of what?” Mystified, Sunset followed her to the living room and promptly stumbled as Fluttershy’s cats attempted murder via affectionate tripping.
Fluttershy paced to the other side. “Everything! You. Them. What they’ll think of me. What they’ll do to me. Ooh… I should’ve just kept my big mouth shut. I didn’t want you to be worried about me, but now I’m worried about me, and I’m worried about you, and you’re worried about you, and you’re worried about me too so I didn’t even do that right.”
She took a deep breath and turned back to Sunset, though her eyes danced elsewhere. “I’ve known for a while that you and Miss Celestia hunt monsters.”
“How?”
Fluttershy retrieved her phone from one of the end tables and tapped on it a few times. She stepped just close enough to Sunset to hold the phone out at arm’s length and show her the screen.
Sunset leaned in, and flinched back immediately because there was a Celestia-damned giant spider pictured there. The Horse-eater chased Sunset in the background, while a webbed prisoner occupied the center. One pink arm stretched out from the cocoon to take the selfie, the other raised its fingers in a victory symbol, and an explosion of darker pink hair came down around the smiling blue eyes and bound mouth. The attached text read, “Wish u were here! (jk, it’s horrifying).”
“I’m sorry I didn’t tell you.” Fluttershy set down the phone and resumed her fidgeting. “I’m one of your monsters, and I hid it from you this whole time.”
“No.” Sunset grabbed Fluttershy’s shoulders. Blue eyes blinked open in surprise, finally meeting Sunset’s gaze. “No-no-no, you are not one of ‘my’ monsters. You are my very good friend, and this does not change anything. If you want to keep your…”
She floundered a moment. “‘True nature’ seems offensive. What’s a good way to say it? ‘Race?’ ‘Species?’”
“‘Species’ works.”
“Right, if you want to keep your species a secret even from me, I’m okay with that. If you want to trust me with it, I absolutely promise my lips will be sealed. I can’t honestly say how the faculty would react… but come on, I’m an alien horse and they let me off the hook. I really think Miss Celestia would be cool with it so long as you’re not going around eating people.”
Sunset’s determined look suddenly wavered. “I mean… you don’t eat people, do you?”
“SEE!?” Fluttershy pushed herself out of the hug. “You don’t trust me!”
“I do, Flutters, and I can prove it!”
Sunset pulled off her jacket and waved the empty fabric in the air. She turned out her pockets, revealing nothing but lint and lipstick. She stepped over to the end table, stumbled on a cat, and upturned her purse to show only loose change and a few brass shell casings.
“No weapon.” Sunset reached over and gripped Fluttershy’s hand. “Not even my usuals. No ‘insurance.’ No backup. I’m an unarmed teenage girl, and that’s okay because I’m here with one of my bestest friends in the world.”
Fluttershy turned the hand-hold into an embrace. “Oh, Sunset, I’m sorry. Here I was thinking you didn’t trust me, and it was me who didn’t trust you. I’ll show you, I… yes, it’ll be better that way. So you’re not left wondering.”
She gave a quick glance around the living room. “I think I have enough space. Can you close the curtain, please?”
Sunset obeyed, shutting off the window to the outside. When she turned back, Fluttershy’s shirt was already off and she had begun pulling down her pants.
“Fluttershy!” Sunset threw her arms up in front of her eyes.
“I love these pajamas! I’m not ruining them for this.”
“Can you please…”
Fluttershy gave an adorable little huff. “I’ll get a towel on, okay? It won’t matter in a moment.”
The conversation went on as Fluttershy moved to the bathroom. “Animals go around naked all the time, and they’re not embarrassed. Don’t ponies?”
“Yes, but I’m not a pony anymore.” Sunset blinked at the existential crisis she just opened, then shrugged. To be honest, she didn’t give much thought to her hybrid nature, and that suited her just fine.
Fluttershy returned, clad in white towels with her nervous expression back in place. “I’m ready. Please don’t be scared.”
“I won’t,” Sunset promised, and hoped it was true.
Fluttershy closed her eyes once more. Her brow furrowed in concentration, then relaxed… and grew.
Size was the first change Sunset noticed. A mere five seconds saw Fluttershy drop to a kneel and grow tremendously forwards, backwards, and to the sides. The yellow skin vanished to mottled grey, and Fluttershy’s face drowned in a mess of wrinkles and whiskers.
It was more than a little gross. Sunset took a long, cowardly blink, shielding her eyes from the rest of the mercifully-short transformation.
When she looked again, she startled at how much of the room was now occupied. The creature before her was six feet high and twice as long, resembling nothing so fierce as a grey, wrinkled pile of blubber with two stubby fins poking out from each side.
Wide blue eyes stared back at her, glassy with unspent tears. “Please don’t be scared.” The voice was perfectly Fluttershy’s, bizarrely squeaked by the huge whiskered mouth.
Sunset was perturbed, but not afraid. “You’re a manatee.”
“A were-manatee.”
“I need to sit down.”
With Fluttershy pressing in on the living room furniture, Sunset retrieved a chair from the dining room and plopped down on it. One of the cats immediately jumped into her lap. She rubbed her eyes, and stared blankly at Fluttershy before continuing. “It’s like… I don’t want to know how, but I kind of feel I should.”
“I was bitten by a were-manatee.”
“That’s the ‘what,’ not the ‘how.’”
Fluttershy fidgeted, which in her present form entailed wiggling impotently on the floor. “It happened when I was very young. My family vacationed in the Caribbean, and I snuck away one day to go out on a pier where I saw a bunch of dolphins playing. I slipped and fell in… I was a weak swimmer back then. I started sinking, and I screamed to the dolphins for help but they just kept on playing.”
Somehow, the whiskered mouth pouted cutely. “Dolphins are jerks.”
“They are dumb animals,” Sunset noted. She gently lifted the cat from her lap and set it to the ground.
“Did you know they rape their females? And commit genocide?”
“I think we’re getting off topic.” The words ended with an ‘oof’ as the other cat jumped on Sunset’s bladder.
The first cat rubbed itself on Fluttershy’s bulk as she went on. “I was half-drowned by the time the were-manatee found me. Its bite gave me the strength to rise back above water and breathe. We talked for a little while afterwards: he said he had been a manatee so long he forgot how to turn human, but he was happy as he was and asked me to stay with him. I told him I couldn’t, so he taught me how to manage my curse and sent me on my way.”
“The curse, right.” Sunset removed the new cat, settled back, and it returned to her lap. “Tell me how that works. What happens when the moon is full?”
Fluttershy wiggled again, voice straining with her nervous confession. “It’s very scary. I change forms, and forget all about my humanity. All I can think about is gorging myself.”
“Whoa.” Sunset leaned forward, suddenly a bit more nervous.
“But only when I’m already submerged in water,” Fluttershy finished.
Sunset blinked. “Did that ever actually happen?”
“Once,” Fluttershy admitted. “I was at a late-night swim party with Rarity.”
“Yeowch. Was everyone okay?”
Fluttershy’s head bobbed up and down. “They were surprised, but no one was hurt. I only get hungry for sea grass.”
The chair scooched as Sunset leaned back heavily. Eyes closed, she shook her head and smiled.
“You’re not scared?” Fluttershy ventured.
Sunset took a fresh breath in and looked back to the manatee. Her gaze passed over the stubby flippers and oval body, and she arched an eyebrow. “Let me put it this way: if you really wanted to attack me right now, what would you do?”
Fluttershy shifted, sending a wave of fat rolling down her flank. “Um… well, first I would change back into a human.”
“Exactly.” One palm upwards, Sunset beamed comfortingly. “Fluttershy, as weird and anticlimactic as this whole conversation has been, I can very confidently say that I love and trust you as much as I did yesterday.”
“Oh, good.” Fluttershy quivered again, this time happily. “I’d hate for you to think I was evil. Even the were-manatee wondered if I would abuse his power, so I promised him I would take the gift and use it to make to world a better place.”
A pause.
Sunset’s smile shrank a fraction as she considered, finally asking, “How…?”
“I don’t know,” Fluttershy said glumly. “Back then I thought I’d be like a superhero, but look at me! I’m even more helpless than usual. It’s frustrating… I really want to make good on my promise, but I don’t know how.”
“I’m sure you will one day,” Sunset offered, wondering if Applejack could sense the lie from across town.
At least Fluttershy bought it. Her wrinkled face creased a smile. “Yeah, I know. Um… I think I’ll go to school today after all. Thanks, Sunset.”
“No problem, pal.” Sunset grinned, and covered her eyes as Fluttershy began the only-slightly less disgusting process of transforming back.
Huh... Well... Did not expect that development. I expected A development, but the specific one unfolding was... Huh.
WELL DONE!
I can totally see this happening to her.
Were-manatee
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this is more insane than were-goats.
Well... that hapenned.
She... Well. By my D&D Experience, i know you can have a lot of were beasts... well, first time i got a were-manatee...
I can think of one case she can use her powers to do some good : she jump from a high location on a villain and transform mid-fall.
Target captured... and probably flattened. XD
Well that is something new and different that now exists. Pretty cool, though
Buh.... Welp I figured she would end up a dryad or something but this is somehow better.
Useful.
Heh.
Oh? Also, you double spaced between I'm and just.
Species it is then.
Daaw...
Whoa there! This is NOT that kind of fic!
She's not a pony at the moment, is she?
Wat.
Agreed, I expected vampire. That'd have been cool.
Why IS that a thing anyway?
... No, I did not. Nor did I WANT to.
Oh. That, even happen?
Phew.
Aww...
How do you abuse the power to turn into a manatee?
(Nor should you apologize.)
...I literally can't think of a less threatening monster
... wow, I really didn't expected it. you actually managed to make Fluttershy even more harmless than she already is.
Good job
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The horror! Now I can no longer enjoy a salad on the beach without the fear that she may emerge from the water and eat it.
... That was unexpected.
And is so off-the-wall, I've added it to the "Our Werebeasts Are Different" page of TV Tropes. (In spoilers, of course.)
Until next time...
Anon e Mouse Jr.
Is her hate for dolphins inspired from these comics?
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*gasp* Fluuershy is a monster!
OH, THE HU-MANATEE
I'm trying so hard not to laugh out loud right now. I would never guess, in a million years, that you would make Fluttershy a.... were-manatee. I didn't even know that was a thing, why is that a thing?
Yeah, good luck trying to help the world as that, Fluttershy.
Well played. Well. Played.
Were-manatee is honestly way funnier than any of the theories I had.
Also Fluttershy's desire to save the day seems to me like a screaming Chekhov's Gun.
ALSO also, thanks for making me laugh at dolphin rape, you monster.
Cannot... unsee...!
Okay, that was definitely unexpected. Not exactly a 'monster'.
Dolphins are jerks.
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*facepalm* oi vey
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.............GGGGGGGGGRRRRRROOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAANNNNNNNNNNNN!
Well she can save a drowning Child if she comes across one and sure children would love to play with her.
This is so unexpected that it's hilarious.
Well that came out of left field.
I was wondering what she was, figured it was something that was only 'mostly harmless', and in the end gave up guessing.
Were-manatee was never on the list though. Very amusing though, and with how worried Fluttershy was, it was pretty cute too.
Good job.
... How. How does that even... what even. A were-manatee of all things.
Edit: Oh, and yes. Dolphins are pretty much just absolute bastards. It's pretty fucked up.
Oh my god that's amazing
Best chapter ever. Fluttershy gave Sunset a strip show. I wonder if the curtains match the drapes.
Oh and fluttershy transformation is even more harmless then I expected (I was assuming rabbit).
...manatees are adorable. Far moreso than dolphins.
I'll admit, however, I didn't see this coming.
Well. That's a thing. Hopefully Fluttershy gets the whole "hard to kill without using silver" thing. That would certainly be a plus. Of course, for all I know, her particular curse is sensitive to zinc or bismuth or something.
Also, presumably all of Sunset's friends know about the monster hunting. I wonder what they think of it.
In all, a very enjoyable interlude. I look forward to whatever's next.
You were worried about this?
bit by a Manatee?...
but...It's freaking IMPOSSIBLE to be bitten by a Manatee.
Hell i wish i had the link that said this woman had to Literally Stick her hand into a Manatees moutht in order to be bitten
wait here it is
http://www.pbs.org/newshour/updates/8-things-didnt-know-manatees/
its #4
But yeah did not expect that, but it was really freaking funny. Poor Flutters, maybe you can help be a conservationist.
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Maybe her hybrid form would be more useful? Maybe she'd have arms and legs then and not be a pile of blubber. If not then she could try changing in mid air and landing on people.
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Well if Werecreatures are ONLY harmed by silver we could push her off of high places onto people we don't like.
Seriously that's the best I've got.
Something just occurred to me... Undead are magically animated corpses of various types. Also, there's at least one Chrysalis pony attending CHS. Finally, Chrysalis herself had no trouble using her full power. Oh, and Fluttershy has a magical transformation totally unrelated to a shared pony nature.
Shouldn't it make sense that one of Princess Celestia's prized magical prodigies figures all this out eventually, and then demonstrates what it means to be one of the three most powerful sorceresses of her generation?
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I'm familiar with the comics, but wasn't thinking about them. It's more inspired by the Cracked article on the subject.
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I approve whole heartedly, and you should also be ashamed of yourself.
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hahahahahahahaha funny joke there norris very funny so funny joke hahahaha good one.
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Well, I certainly never expected this. Just when you think this fic has reached maximum crazy, turns out there's another level. I didn't expect her to be a threat (its Fluttershy after all ), but yeah, well, at least this isn't a problem. Though the idea of the hunters chasing a giant were-manatee sounds both sad and hilarious (sad for Fluttershy, hilarious for the hunters).
Figures that Pinkie would blab. So the rest of the girls knew about Fluttershy's... condition, and have just been keeping quiet about it? I wonder if Fluttershy could talk to animals before her curse or if the curse helped with that. And kind of funny to see Sunset ponder about whether she's a pony or a human before deciding it doesn't matter (being almost adopted by Principal Celestia probably helps with the identity question).
I laughed.
Absurd enough, I approve
Um, wow. If you wanted to surprise us, you certainly succeeded. The only thing I can say that hasn't already been said is that you have definitely owned (or been owned by) a cat. The attempted murder by affectionate tripping and standing on a human's bladder are things that every cat does, yet these common behaviors are unknown to dog people.
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really hoping this happens now, after all that sunset has been acting as a newbie it would be good to have her really in her element and prove to the team that she isn't to be underestimated
Kos (Or some say, Kosm) is confirmed to be Fluttershy!
Seriously though, you know Applejack totally felt that disturbance in the Force.
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I suppose she could make the world a better place with her power by using them to rescue drowning people, but that's about it
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You image reminds me of another image... one that's oddly appropriate for this story, all things considered,
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That is all.
I was expecting a rare type of vampire Flutterbat but instead, we got Barbra Manatee up in here!
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...wat
really
OMG flutters how can you be so utterly goddamned harmless
Like, I grew up in Florida, folks. I've dealt with manatees RL. They're completely, 100% harmless. They're big, slow, friendly, attack-less critters. Seriously, it's almost impossible for them to hurt something and they're more likely to just be curious and kinda friendly ANYWAY. (They're really sweet, actually).
This is hysterical. :D
ROTFL. That's far further to the left of field than I expected, well done.
That said, I can imagine ways to abuse the power to turn into a manatee.
Most of them involve the use of explosives in water, though, it has a very narrow application profile. If Fluttershy gets to save the day with her powers, you need an evil battleship or aircraft carrier on the horizon, which is kinda difficult in most worlds, and wherever Canterlot High is located, it does not appear to be a port town...
Does it have a bridge that needs taking out? :)
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I was reading and trying to figure out what she was and you wrote transform and I thought "Giant spider girl?" Because I watched the anime "monster girls." Then you wrote whiskers and flippers and I thought "Oh she's a Selkie. That makes sense." But then you wrote were-manatee. And I'm like "wut."
Ha!
Total random comedy or Chekov's manatee? Inquiring minds want to know!
I guess the real question is, does Sunset have enough gym badges to use Surf outside of battle.
7338211 this is quality content. This is a quality post.
Absolutely fantastic