"Alright girls, you all will have to take turns on my telescope."
Said Twilight, as she adjusted said telescope. The cutie mark crusaders, three fillies who had banded together to find their cutie marks, had convinced Twilight to let them sleep over, along with Twilight's own friends.
They had all wanted to test Twilight's telescope, trying to get their cutie marks in star gazing, or astronomy. Twilight had given a short beginners lecture about the stars, and solar system, but after seeing the three fillies were about to fall asleep way too early, she decided to skip ahead to her telescope.
One by one they tried, each of them letting out an oooh, and an ahhh. Twilight was happy, it was nice to see the three fillies appreciating the night sky. Hopefully this would lead them on a path to knowledge, and some less dangerous and troubling attempts in getting their cutie marks.
"Who knows," continued Twilight, smiling to herself. "Maybe you will find an asteroid, and get it named after you."
"Hey! I see one! I see one!" Exclaimed Sweetie Belle.
"What? No.. What?" Twilight didn't believe it. The likelihood that she would spot one right at this moment would be insanely small.
"Let me see! Let me see!" Scootaloo yelled, pushing aside Sweetie Belle, who let out a small protest, but did not press the point. Scootaloo gasped, grinning. "That's amazing, Sweetie Belle, you're right!"
"What? Give me a turn!" Apple Bloom put in, moving in and looking through the telescope. Though instead of exclaiming how amazing it was, she looked at Twilight with a worried expression. "Is it just me, or is it coming closer?"
Now Twilight looked alarmed, she hurried to the telescope, looking through it towards the so-called asteroid. What she saw shocked her even more than an asteroid would have. She saw something strange and perfectly round enter their atmosphere, and it was by no means an asteroid. It was some sort of crafted sphere, and it was going to land any second now!
"By the sun! It's a-" Before she got to say anymore the girls let out a startled scream, having realized the sphere was going to crash near here. By reflex, Twilight moved to cover the girls, afraid of what would happen.
But, nothing did happen. They heard the crash, but there was no explosion or anything. Though what did happen was a lot of birds near the Everfree forest seemed to wake up, all screaming and flying in all directions. The sound of the impact had also got a lot of ponies out of their homes to look towards the source of the sound.
"Twilight!" One of her friends called, sounding shocked and slightly panicked. "What is going on?!"
She could hear her friends running up, and as they did, Twilight looked towards the forest. She wasn't sure if what she saw was real, something that had been built by intelligent life coming from space. It sounded insane, and she knew of no pony who had made such a breakthrough.
But she was gonna find out!
"Ow ow ow..." Daniel groaned, feeling like the whole world was spinning around. His hand moved to the safety belts, and released them, freeing him to leave the pod as the door seemed to open on its own. Reaching up, he put his hand out, and grabbed the side for support, sort of dragging himself out.
He didn't feel tired, but he was a little disoriented from the violent crash, but he himself and his ship seemed fine. Having no idea where he was, or what to do, he looked into his small ship, and found what he expected to find.
A scouter.
To him this was so cool, but still very scary. A lot of emotions was running through him, and the only thing he could think of doing was to go along with whatever was happening for now. He placed the scouter on the left side of his head amazed how well it sat on him with no straps or anything like that.
The Scouter was a wearable, all-purpose computer that is mainly used to measure power levels early in Dragon Ball Z. They also worked to scan for life forms, and as communicators. Though as a fan of the show, Daniel knew how useless they were in finding out the strength of an opponent, but for now it would serve him well.
Sure, he might look like a Saiyan, but he had no real idea how to use or sense Ki, the spiritual energy. He would have to learn it all, and he still had no idea how dangerous this planet was. For all he knew this place could be filled with monsters!
He couldn't help but chuckle a little, some of it was just as an attempt to calm himself. This was still so unreal, and insanely confusing. Deciding he could not stand around in a random forest forever, he went about to test out his own strength. As a human he was probably average for his age, maybe a little above.
Now however, now he was a Saiyan, so he should be way stronger. He did a few test punches into the air, and already did he feel a massive difference. He was faster, and he could feel the force behind his punches. Moving on to another test, he started to do some careful jumps here and there, half hoping he would start flying.
Daniel didn't fly, but he did jump higher and higher, depending on how much force he used. He couldn't help himself, he started to laugh. This was so much fun! Giving it his all, he managed to jump so high up into the air, that he passed the very top of the trees.
Once he landed, he tried a few flips. It was all so much easier in this new form! Well, while he still looked like himself, he felt much stronger, and so much cooler! Holding out his hand, he grinned, giving it a little jerk, as if expecting something to happen, but nothing did.
Daniel frowned. "Come on.." He tried again, but just like before, nothing happened. "Dammit.." He had expected to fire an energy beam out of his hand, but nothing happened. Then he remembered, he actually knew next to nothing about this stuff. He might have the potential, but without the knowledge, he was just a strong kid.
He looked at his hand, opening and closing it a few times, thinking about how to learn everything he knew Saiyans could do. Sadly though, he didn't get to think for very long, because his thoughts were soon interrupted by some menacingly growling coming from behind him.
Turning around, he came face to face by something he had never seen before. "Whhhaaaaa!!!!" He screamed, jumping back as he just barely missed a claw made of wood slashing at him. He was so surprised he forgot about the fact he was a Saiyan, that he was much stronger than he ever was as a human. Still, a change in body was nothing, inside, he was still the unsecure ten year old boy he had always been.
He did the only thing he could think of, run away...
Interesting start. Perhaps have him live out in the wilderness for now, so he can get a hold of his surroundings and figure out the extent of his newly acquired powers. Doing reconnaissance and all that. He may not be as ruthless as a Saiyan, but I don’t think he would be so trustworthy of Natives he knows next to nothing about.
It would be great if he hides his ship. Wouldn’t want Twilight rummaging through advanced tech and create mishaps.
Perhaps a potential Oozaru fight between him and the Ponies?
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Nice suggestion, I definitely will use that. Thank you.
Just go with the original plan! Prepare the planet for sale!
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Give me a nice offer and I might consider it.
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I cannot offer anything that could possibly reach your standards!
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Darn tootin'!
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No problem mate. Love the stories you’ve been making, you have some talent that’s for sure. Some of your work has made me wonder whether or not I should try my own take on story writing.
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You can always try, see if it is something for you or not. It can never hurt.
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Thank you for the advice. I have an idea brewing in my head, just need to have some motivation and confidence in my writing abilities.
I hope you don't call him daniel
It's not a very cool name and not intimidating either
Its like some scary guy having a lame name like rudy sheldon or tim that makes the situation sound less scary
Look like Dan is going to have an amazing adventure
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Haha!
No no no, as I wrote in my author note, I have a Saiyan name for him. I just picked a human name that was close to it so it sounded more natural when he comes up with his false new name.
Hehe, Sheldon the Saiyan..
I wonder how they would react when they finger out how mush he eats.
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I doubt Saiyans can sustain themselves on sweets. Does this count as alliteration?
So, this is a rather unique story. Well, not entirely unique, but it's a distinctly creative twist on the usual human-in-Equestria-as-[insert thing from other franchise here] type of story, with not only a much younger-than-normal protagonist, but a very different method of turning him into [thing from other franchise] than the usual "something happens at a convention". There's an enormous amount of potential here, and you're off to a short, but acceptable start.
If I may ask, please, please don't permanently remove his tail. I'd be okay with losing it temporarily to stop a Great Ape rampage, but I really don't like how Saiyans just don't have tails anymore in canon DBZ.
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“I really don't like how Saiyans just don't have tails anymore in canon DBZ.”
You’re not alone there.
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Yeah, I feel the same way. I won't remove his tail permently, it's a part of him, and he thinks it's cool.
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If he does have his tail though, then literally everytime he needs to fight someone is just going to grab it and he's going to be crippled. Unless he gets rid of that weakness asap
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In the manga, Goku trained his so he could handle it when someone grabbed it. I plan to do the same here.
Just starting to read this and it comes to mind that, technically, Danny boi can probably learn magic on top of ki control...
So, just how is Daniel going to deal with the fact that there's a full moon pretty much every single night in Equestria?
Good chapter 👍