Raze's Journey X Saiyans of Equestria Crossover
Cover Art Done By The Esteemed Goddess Korra Altarmore!
Journey of Saiyans (Twin Version) Here: Journey of Saiyans (Twin Version)
Oh and this story contains spoilers from this story, so read this if you're confused about the start of the story: Raze's Journey
This is written between me and Boyzilla. We hope you enjoy both versions as the chapters come out. Anything in this story that happens is canon to Raze's Journey and it's canon to Saiyan of Equestria also.
Raze has been gone for a month from Ponyville and has been training in the middle of the desert to the west. Discord has made this month interesting, but it's about to get a little more interesting.
The Doctor and Derpy show up and offer to take Raze back to Ponyville. He reluctantly agrees and then get's inside the TARDIS. The Doctor starts it up and then they're all hit by a Tear in Dimensions that sends them to an alternate Equestria where Raze meets two Saiyan children named Ken and Kira. What will this new adventure have in store for Raze? Will he make new discoveries about himself? Find out in Journey of Saiyans!
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Please review and tell me what you thought!!! :D
Just saiyan.
1688496 You are epic!!! And thanks for your review!!!
another DBZ crossover i see. thou has joined me and the many other fans of the great show on this site
haha. i will read this and your other story soon
1688780 Thanks so much :D
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Did I just detect a Pokemon reference? Meh, oh well. It will be interesting to see where you take this. Hopefully it will still contain the heart of the original fic. I don't care what you slap on it, if the core is crap then it won't matter what's in it. However, this still retains that golden thread that all good fics have at the center. I will see where this goes.
Also don't let the early dislikes be killin' your buzz, haters gonna hate. DBZ, well...dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Cloudchaser_dealwithit.png
1689569 Yeah haters do hate... But it's only the first chapter and honestly I'm going to try my hardest to prove the haters wrong. The first chapter is only meant as a setup. The second will be much more refined and I stake that based on the first chapter of Raze's Journey because I think the first chapter of Raze's Journey was a bit lack luster, but that's just me. I personally hope that people enjoy this fic as much as me and Boyzilla do enjoy writing it.
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Raze, my friend.
I think this is a start of a Beautiful friendship, of writers.
Our crossover(s) is gonna be epic. I can feel it in my ever hungry stomach.
1690534 Yes it shall be epic!!!!! I will make sure of it!!!! And I know you will too!!!! And now to continue writing chapter 2!!!
Lol, it's this. http://www.fimfiction.net/story/65173/Journey-of-Saiyans-%28Twin-Version%29
Thats the Twin Version, you can also put it in a Link format. Like this
Journey of Saiyans (Twin Version)
1691638 Okay because I had the original link to the passworded file
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Well nowz your don't. Ins't that fantastic!
1691676 Yes it truly is fantastic!!!
1696978 LOL Epic pictures my friend!!!
I'm waiting for somebody to get the reference I made in this chapter let me know if you find it!! :D
That was the fastest you've turned out a chapter ever. Now you're making me, THE Space Pope, look lazy.
1697431 It helps when you have a great editor!! Boyzilla has it good when turning out chapters and he knows his stuff. He edited the chapter to make it better and then I went over it one more time to get rid of errors and anything else out of place
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I miss the easy days of editing. Now, people expect me to do stuff. It kind of sucks
1697473 Well, the future isn't always bright
I'm torn. I want to favorite this, but it's almost an exact copy of Boyzilla's story only with Raze/Derpy/Dr. Whooves's perspectives.
1699207 Actually I'm sorry to say, but I made the second chapter and he threw in Chirs/Karmel's perspectives!! So were both writing this. He made some changes to the chapter. Very welcomed changes mind you. And that's why there similar. Sorry to disappoint you
1700393No, I know you're both writing this. Btw, who's Karmel? And like I said, since you're both writing this (though from what I can tell, you're doing the writing first) I feel like I only need to read one. It might be interesting to see it from a different perspective, but atm it doesn't sound too appealing. Sorry.
1700459 Chris/Karmel is Ken's Adoptive father that lives in his head due to a seal made when Ken was in his old universe before teleporting to Equestria. You should read Boyzilla's story Saiyans of Equestria it will tell you more!! Oh and check out Raze's Journey (My Story) If you want to know a little about Raze.
1700480No I knew about Chris. I just didn't know that his name was Karmel.
1700492 Oh.... Well problem solved
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Chris Dell, Full-blooded saiyan and everything my fellow DBZ writer had said. In the Side story in the Saiyan of Equestria fan fiction, it mentions Chris's saiyan name: Karmel. It is his birth name, this is also mentioned in the Twin Version of Journey of Saiyans.
1702328Really? What chapter? 'Cause I don't remember it. Wait, was it that Chris's history chapter that was a while back? If it is, then that's why I didn't remember. Been a while.
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It was, it was. And it has been a while since then.
You ever had writers block? Well here's my experience in video form!
In the end you realize that you don't want a banana... You want an apple (Oh and Banana Mustaches are okay too)
1723243 Huh... DIdn't know PsychicPebbles made another animation. SUBSCRIPTION BOX YOU HAVE LIED TO ME AGAIN!!!
1723739 It's okay! Because you saw it here!
I have no idea what that animation has to do with the chapter
1725262 It was an alliteration for writers block
I'm so f***ing high right now
1727816 Lol
It's probably supposed to be do.
Oh and there's a dragonball ad at the bottom of the screen here when I'm posting this!
"Neiiil, this chapter is good. It deserves a muffin button."
"We don't have a muffin button sir,"
"Neil, gather the dragon balls and wish for a muffin button and a plasma TV."
"Sir that is a grievous misuse of their power."
"I'm about to misuse my hand upside your heaaad."
Seriously though, we need a muffin emoticon
1767438 I fixed that glaring evil word with the sword of justice known as "Do"
1769486 I couldn't agree more! Let's get that muffin emoticon!
questions! ask and you shall be told... to shut the fuck up.
1814148 Lol :D
Its generally a good day when this updates and today is no exception
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1966289 SUDDENLY A WILD APPLEBLOOM!
1966335 I counteract you with THIS