Anim has seen many realms in his time as a realm guardian, however a dimension of talking colorful ponies, well that's new.
As Anim joins in the life of six ponies in a town in the middle of a continent called Equestria, he must find the missing pieces of his past life to find out what happened "that day".
(The timeline of this story starts in the finale of season 2 and before the premiere of season 3, so any content not mention after season 3 or beyond won't be shown until, the continuation of the story)
All content based on MLP:FIM belong to Lauren Faust and Hasbro.
The Living World and it's characters belong to myself.
Chapters (26)
Hi there! This could be an interesting premise...
Just a few suggestions, writing-wise. If you plan to continue using letters or journals, it might be a good idea to put those parts in italics. And when you have characters standing around talking, it's usually more stimulation to vary the sentence structure of the dialogue. That way it's not just so-and-so said, so-and-so said, so-and-so said.
6430187 Thank you for the advice good, friend I'll see what I can do about that.
Disclaimer: I do not apologize for what is to come.
*pat* *pat*... *patpatpatpatpatpatpatpatpatpatpatpatpatpatpatpat* *SMACK* Applebloom, Applebloom. Poor naive little Applebloom. C’mere, hun, let me teach you the dangers of the unknown. *ahem*
DO YOU WANT CANCER? ‘CAUSE THAT’S HOW YOU GET CANCER.
YEAH, LIKE GETTING CANCER.
STAHP. STAHPIT. *SMACK* NO. NO ROCK CANCER.
DON’T WORRY RARITY, HE’S JUST GOT ROCK CANCER. NoTHiNg tO WoRRy AbOUt.
Err... uh- I- I-... I hate being serious. Let’s just get this over with...*sigh* Ya lost me. Let me just read the last chapter and I’ll go... It’s not the storyline! I love the storyline, it just... *grrrr*
ENGLISH MOTHERFUCKER, DO YOU WRITE IT?!
Sorry.
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Yeah hold up *goes to time machine*
(Past Self) Okay time to- *time machine appears* *steps out present me*
(Present Self) Da buck mate, START CORRECTING THE DAMN GRAMMAR OR I'LL SEND YOU TO THE LAND WHERE THE SUN DON'T SHINE!