REVIEW [NSFW] Soft and Pink - semillon (Random Recommendations in <50 words #14) · 8:53am May 21st
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Overall. Just fish already!
Best lines:
“I know!” said the seagull.
I love you more than meaning. I love you forever. I love you more than words[...]
He rubbed his chest, then tilted his head to the left. Whatever just happened, it’s okay. I’m not mad at you. Let’s keep going.
He tapped the tips of his claws on the table, and he lightly dragged his claws over the wooden surface, before tapping them on the table again.
Tap. Scrape. Tap.
And Ocellus looked sick.
“We’re going to have fun, us three. I’m Evil Eye. She’s Fuzzy Slipper.”
The ground should have fallen out from underneath him. The world should have changed. The words he had been yearning after for years should have lifted his heart from the slumber it’d been in before Sandbar’s love
Gallus felt a hurried tremble in his chest, urging him to answer the stallion before that warmth grew cold
Why read? young six characterisation; builds on characters well; challenging; justifies the mature tag
Flaws. Writing structure; dialogue; [_hr] not brackets; 'she' is the cat's mother
“Clover[—]”[...]
“The Clever?” [...]
“The drug.[...]
Meta: Skim-read? ✔ Full-read? ✔ Recommend Author? ✔ DEEP DIVE HERE
Final thought. Sex on the beach with beaks and bars.
HELL YEAH
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