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Rarity learns Math by Gavier (Random Recommendations in <50 words #12) · 2:41am May 16th

ERarity learns Math
Twilight decides it's time Rarity starts learning how to teleport. That means, tutoring classes.
Gavier · 1.3k words  ·  56  2 · 1.4k views

Overall. Twilight thinks in 0s and 1s.

Rarity will show her the importance of I.Ref

Best lines:

Luckily, [it] turns out you can enjoy a lecture on non-Eucoltidean geometries, neigh-dimensional vectors, and other abstract whinnying when it's from Twilight Sparkle. Goodness, how cute her face, how angelical her voice. It danced on each sentence with practiced grace, turning the dull textbook into song.


She turned to watch Twilight. She had finished her counting, and was now looking every bit of regal [as] someone placing a door between two book shelves can look.


Twilight teleported, now at her side. With that smug half smile of hers, she almost stopped being the most precious thing in the world.

Almost.


Why read? strong character voice; builds on characters; witty asides; interesting concepts.

Flaws. The writing could be even sharper.

Meta: Skim-read? Full-read? TBC Recommend Author? TBC

Special This was edited after an initial review (here)

Final thought. Multiplication (I want more fics!)

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