The few first chapters are a mess (or more), so I'll be editing them if I have the time to edit any.
there is a small introduction I wrote, it is not recommended that you read it since it serves little meaning to the story.
Twenty years past since the outbreak that happened in equestria...
Equestria is infested with necromorphs...
The necromorphs and other equestrians have been divided away from each other into territories.
Now a Necromorph outbreak is just daily news feed for the public.
Equestria has learned to live with the necromorphs as residency
But one necromorph finds a way back to reality and the world of the living...
WARNING!!!
This contains grimdark content.
If you don't like grimdark then if you are willing to leave then do so.
Chapters (8)
People who dislike....
I don't expect to NOT get any dislikes...
I won't judge because some of you guys just don't like it...
I am not the best story writer so...Yeah sometimes people make it sometimes they don't
So you can like or dislike if you feel like it...
Interesting... I'm faving this
I think I f
cked up in some part is why people just didn't like it...
But I was rushed when close and at the end...
I think the ending of chapter 1 didn't made the cut for some of you guys who disliked
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Why thank you
I said this a lot when I ever see a comment from you!
XD
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You're welcome
>Dead Space
>Ponies
>Elements pf psochology
Favoriting!!! Not reading yet, I'll wait for moar =P
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At least read some of it!
but you can do it on your own time
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I'm going to go one better
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Picture wouldn't show...
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Interesting, I it shows up on my screen... damn I fail at inserting pictures.
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Oh well...
STOP STOP STOP!
MAY contain grimdark?!
XenoJohn.... It has Necromorphs. It's impossible to not contain grimdark.
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Fahk!
Remember dead space is Gorey as shit!
2071399 Oh yeah I found out the reason you may have screwed up.
Maybe.
Ahem.
Caps lock. Too much of it.
Verb tenses. Too... What's the word... Gah you know what I mean.
Conclusion: Get an editor/proof reader.
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People have asked and sometimes I said yes or no but a lot had done nothing...I'm talking about the people I said yes to.
And I don't even if they are doing anything...
Or they must have ignored me...
Idk why would they ignore me I sent them messages...
Then idk is going on with them
2072660 *taps chin* Hum....
*le placing of this fic on the 'Looking for Editors' group*
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You my friend are a good soul
I may not be reading this but can you explain where the Marker is located during all this (The Necromorphs can't get really close to it nor can they leave the affected area the Marker is projecting to [Deadspace 2 explained that when the first games Marker was destroyed all the Necromorphs made from it became a goolike substance]). Also going off the Markers affect on the living (Paranoia, Insomnia, Several forms of mental psychosis, and ECT...).
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Might contain a spoiler because you didn't read it yet:
The Marker is located 5-6 miles away in the mountain that the necromorphs are in...
does that solve your question?
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Thanks I will mark to read later. Haven't really felt like reading much in the past few days. The reason I ask is that a lot of crossovers that require major thought like this, Silent Hill, and various others aren't really flushed out fully (because things are left out major Plot-Holes are shown) and though I don't care much for gore but I do like to be scared every once and awhile (not pissed off because someone decided they just want to mass murder a collection of characters).
1) Slashers don't eat, because Luke most nexros, they don't have digestive systems. Only feeders do.
2) shouldn't "Boss" be an Infecter?
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1) If you search for dead space downfall and watch it there is a seen where slashers are eating corpses...
2) Surprise calls the main necromorph character 'boss' because she is like a henchm...Henchmare to him.
And she is his best friend...
Does that help your problem or will you keep bitch'n about it?
2080492 Sorry. I use the Dead Space Wiki. More acurate
Downfall: since WHEN do you see Infecters flying?
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That confused me when I saw a infector fly in dead space downfall
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btw Remember those saws in Downfall???
WANTS
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So you want some 'none infected' characters with those saws?
Sorry but no...
I am making the 'none infected' characters with weapons will stick to the ones from the game
2081020 No i ment in the real game
i want the saws to be in the real game
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Oh.....
Well....
ME TO!!!!!!!!!!!
cjdutdryhtjdetrtgh STOP!
I think THIS might be proof of weapons just like the saws will be in dead space 3!
I JUST SAW A SEEN WHERE SOMETHING WAS HIT WITH SOMETHING!!!!
THAT MIGHT BE LEGIT PROOF!!!
2081117 The closses to saws is the Ripper
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Yeah....
The ripper is quite similar to the saw things...
This... THIS LOOKS DAMN INTRESTING.
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:D
Did you read it!?
Got dead space 3 today. So when I'm not playing it I be checking to see if you update this story.
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WHY CAN'T MY MOM AND DAD LET ME GET THATGAME!!!!!!
1) D:
2) I'll try when I don't have any home work
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I feel like punching you...I want that game so badly
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Me to....
My mom and dad reject me from getting games like dead space or call of duty....
I WANT TO GET THAT GAME REALLY BADLY!!!!!
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*Too
.
...Sorry I let bad habits get to me
and why won't they let you have dead space and BLOPS or call of duty?
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Hint: I'm turning 13 in march....I hate sharing personal information
And second I don't have an xbox and my laptop is shit when it comes to gaming
Third they won't let me get a better computer and my mom won't let me use her Dell computer except for Minecraft....
And no she does not have a Dell laptop
And last....Sometimes my grammar sucks like shit
Glad to see you capture the fact that 90% of necromorphs are missing parts of their digestive track
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Thanks
I have been researching about necromorphs...
From dead space wiki and other dead space stuff
And thanks for being honest about me and stuff
The way you write is amazing and so fast... you are a very talented brony
I can't wait for more good luck Xeno!!
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THANK YOU FOR SAYING THAT TO ME!!!!!
It's an honor to hear (read) that....
I'll try to update sooner or later
now i'm reminded of that song
Dammit so close to finding a story bout a HUMAN necromorph in equestria. Oh well... It's a great story by the way login it so far
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Well somethings don't always go your way
But glad you liked it
Sorry for it being a little short
Hope you guys liked it!
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Nice job!
Can't wait for some more! Good luck Xeno!
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Thanks I'll get to the next chapter and start working on it.....
And I might take a while because I'm a slow writer