N.E.M.E.S.I.S. one of umbrella corp.'s secret patients in the hospital was killed when the helicopter landed on him but when he awoke he felt something he didn't feel on Earth after the experimentation. He could feel sorrow, hate, anger, and many other emotions that came back to his mind. He started to feel these after helping Alice even though she impaled him on the metal rod. N.E.M.E.S.I.S. woke up in a forest with his mini-gun next to him, fully loaded and was feeling alone, until he stumbled into a town and finds... ponies but how will they react when they see his monstrous appearance.
Told in first person. I will also be making modifications to his character like what weapons he is carrying and things like that. Might be tagged has adventure later on main characters may or may not change it depends on what I decide to have him do.
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I like how you used a picture of Barney Stinson to call people fags, when Neil Patrick Harris who plays Barney is in fact gay. Food for thought.
1238766I find it funny because I'm not a big derpy fan can you at least try to indult me better I mean really its like talking to a child
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it takes one to know one
here's jesus the way brony's unite like it!
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1238809actually I like thw one that says jesus loves you
But I think your a cunt
1238813and the reason it says may god have mercy on you is because christians believe magic is satanist basically some christians are scared of ponies
1238839I. Didn't say anything about friends and I like being in solitude let's me be able to say whatever I want and I don't have to worry about funerals
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and u dont have parents
Ok this is an unexpected crossover...
I'll give it a read.
1239029I was actually planning to put that in there myself
Finally that asshole is gone! Well, ima read this fic and see how it goes.
YOU WILL UPDATE THIS STORY AND YOU WILL LIKE IT!
wanna know whats sad?
*reads comments* - LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL
*reads story* n.e.m.s.i.s. FTW
NOTHING. except that someone got on to fimfiction to spread hate and misery around here, hell he even made an acount to!!!
probly off dissing more bronies in a different story.
EPIC story and FUCK YO CLIFF HANGER.
1239277so you enjoy it well that was better then expected
not bad
Enjoy this cliff hanger.
fuck you too then
Can you make the Author's notes bold?!?!?! I keep thinking they're part of the story until I read it all.
wow cool
MOAR
This crossover was unexpected and interesting.You might need a proof-reader though.
1242877I know that I have bad grammar, but I didn't expect it to get this many views
1242925 Yeah, you really need a proof reader. I don't know anyone who can, sadly. Oh, by the way, fix the story's summary. It just looks awful. No punctuation. You can't even tell when a new sentence begins and an old one ends.
i don't know why it it fit this chapther
I'm glad you have it visibly separated this time.
1249790Your welcome good sir
Is he still writing everything down or can he talk now thanks to a spell?
1250510Magic in Equestria healed his vocal chords because magic has to have some effect on him
1250536 k just asking cuz l don't remember reading it the other chapter unless I some how skipped it
1250565Yeah I was trying to move it along faster but it was the very end of chapter two
1242925yes, unfortunately you do. sentences drone on and you need to either use commas, or separate them, because this is rather hard to read. always room for improvement yes? Oh, BTW, try reading your sentences out loud. It really helps.
i'm sorry, but these sentences just drone on. just saiyin'
1252218its all good
421 really
1267054what does 421 mean
Hi, I found this story by searching up "G-virus" on fimfiction. When I saw your story on the results list and saw that it was similar to mine, I immediately decided to give it a read. I was wondering if you would mind me borrowing a few ideas from this fic to use in mine.
1329322I could care less if you either decided to fap to it or take ideas
1329385 Awesome sauce! Thanks! Here, have an awesome picture:
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Please learn how to use bold, just so you don't have to keep mentioning me.
1429368but its more fun that way
1430404 You're sounding a bit like Trollestia.
Understood Boss!
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N.E.M.E.S.I.S. as a nice guy...I like. He should start a foalsitting business. See how he lovingly holds Brad Vickers' head...
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FUCK THAT!
Yeah you need an editor.
1696592if you count what he was before being nemesis
1698597 Of course. I'm just saying it would be interesting to see how the NEMESIS would foalsit too. He may be a bloodthirsty beast, but come on, you've gotta admit, seeing how he'd act in the position of a caregiver would be interesting.