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Lonely Shadow


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While trying to go on vacation, Clay and his fiancee Firefly, are teleported and separated in an alternate universe that is similar to their own. Except that everyone they know from their universe is the opposite gender. Clay tries to reunite with Firefly, while trying to keep his identity secret from the others. But how well will he do once he meets his alter ego Terra?

For backstory and a better understanding please read Wings for a Pony and On a Cross and Arrow It is highly recommended. I do not take any credit for on a Cross and Arrow. That goes to Connor Cogwork.

Cover art provided by Conicer

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 34 )
Riz

Bless you child~ :heart::heart:

Lovely!

2629179 I'm not a child! I'm a man!

But thank you.

2629180 Can't believe somepony looked at it that quick.

Riz

2629199

Then..

Bless you man for this fic

2629201
Well, for me the annotation will be enough. And since I read your works, I know that this wouldn't be bad. :twilightblush:

Dayum! As much as I love your work a cliffhanger? That's like a slap upside the head now I'm gonna be wondering what's gonna happen! Ahhhhhhhhh I don't like cliffhangers where the next chapter isn't uploaded yet! Imma go punch a tree now.

You have almost the exact same, if not same title to another story and similar story playout.(I dont use big words, nerds:facehoof:)
Anywho I don't realy care.
I shall read.
:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

Whoops didn't read the Desc.
I shall smash my skull on the wall.
*smashes head on the wall*
Fuck that hurt.
*sees hole in wall*
Damn I'm a hardhead.

Sh-sh-sha-shit.
:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:








AMAZING!!!
:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

Sweet it's here, but this once again reminds me what do you think Zelda is doing?

"don't know, don't care. That mare gave me the creeps"

But she was you?

"case and point"

Holy Celestia, I love where this is going :)

Riz

2629201
What's the relation of Terra and Barb ? And Clay's and Spike ? Friends or cousins ?

2642384 Cousins, due to them living with their aunt/ uncle.

Riz

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So Spike/Barbs is the adoptive son/daughter of Twilight/Dusk ?




Please remind me who is the pink pegasi? Pegasuses? on the cover .

Comment posted by Riz deleted May 29th, 2013

2645960 Yes. And the pink Pegasi are Firefly and her gender swap Lightning Bug.

Nice beginning. I hope this story gets updated soon.

3836752 I'll try. Sorry my lack of updating.

3838259 I understand. Not many people have responded for awhile, but I think this story has great potential. Best of luck.

Can I please do a spelling mistake because it has really been peeving me. You spell my last name as Barry. It's Berry. Ask me! It is! Other than that excellent set-up and I hope to read the next chapter.:pinkiehappy:

Hay stop being on highatuse mode and get back teh getting chapters finish I hate teh be rude but I don't like teh work but I still fin do it (pays in gold) ordeal so get back up and start writing

6050628 Soon hopefully. Rest assured it is next on my agenda.

6051617 Wait you said it was next on your agenda did you mean after the wings for a pony 2 update?

6053346 Yes. That is the plan.

why did I just find this story? its so good I just wish there was more

“Uncle… you becoming a prince is as likely as me adopting a unicorn.” Terra snickered.

Very likely.

Publish date: May 26 2013
Reading date: May 10 2021

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